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for Reluctant Promises

by penny1200

person Ysi
schedule March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this story and the humor. And I do love the tension between Hermione and Draco. Keep up the good work!
person OkibiKitsune
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to say this fanfic is very well done. I love the interaction between Draco and Hermione. *sheepish grin* This is one of my favorite pairings yet I find so few fics of them well written so your story, Reluctant Promises, is a real treat to me. I can't wait for your next update!
person Brittney
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First, I love that Harry and Luna are together. I love Ginny but I always thought Luna 'got him', plus she's cooky and he's, let's face it, kind of boring on his own; he needs the excitement.
Second, I wish I could see Malfoy's face every time he's introduced to some new muggle doodad. Oh gosh, I can't wait for the TV lesson! And cars, is he going to learn how to drive a car? Or *gasp* ride the bus?! I feel a little bit evil thinking of the hilarious ways you could introduce him to the muggle world.
Third, I so know where you're going with the Ginny and Zabini thing, and you have my full approval ^_^.
Fourth, you're doing a great job with the characters and with the storyline and writing. I'm intrigued and find myself wishing I'd found this at the end rather than the 5th chapter.

Thanks for this!

-Impatiently waiting for the next chapter.
person Amy
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love where your story is going! I like how different it is to the other stories i have read!
person Sam
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I'm totally loving this story so far! I've read it all in one sitting and am quite sad that I've reached the end. Draco's plan to make Hermione want him at the end of this chapter amused me, I think it's going to lead to awkward situations in the future...and probably a lot of unresolved sexual tension for a while. Oh no! Draco's going to burn his house down... Or something. I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon?
person kit
schedule March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is quite interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing how everyones relationships will develop. haha im guessing lunas gasp meant that she finally figured out who ginny's soul mate is....blaise! There's just so many things to comment on, but I have so little time at the moment. I would have been so mad/disappointed if my boyfriend only cooked dinner for himself without any consideration of me. It definitely seems to me that Ron and Hermione aren't a perfect match.
Cant wait for the next chapter. Hopefully hermione gets there before Draco burns the whole house down.
person Magzie
schedule March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story this far! Cannot wait to read more of Draco and Hermione's lessons. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read your next update!
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading all the chapters. I appreciated that all the characters were spot on, and Harry is with Luna. ( I don't normally ship that couple, but I detest Harry/Ginny. )

I wonder if Hermione will save the day. Oh, and Ginny/Blaise? Seems like a great pair.

I look forward to the next chapter. Please don't take months to update. :)
person Courtney
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely great. I love how in character all the characters are- while still maintaining a refreshingly different story. I especially LOVE how you're pulling off HarryxLuna; I was always a fan after the 5th book, and was disappointed that J.K. Rowling didn't take that route. I still like Ginny too, so I'm glad there wasn't a huge falling out there either in your story. Adding a changed Pansy too is really interesting.

And of course, your central pairing, DracoxHermione, is working out really well. I...well...HATED Ron, and was so frustrated they ended up together >_>; Draco and Hermione suit each other in all the right ways. I'm not a huge fan like I am with HarryxLuna, but you're really making it worse.

I really hope you continue your story. I was so disappointed when I realized I had finished all the current chapters out! Keep up the great work.
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So happy you've updated. Love this story line. Have to agree on Luna as a good choice for Harry. Glad it's not abandoned. Yeah