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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nie chapter. I don't think I like severus/ron. I figure Severus is kinda like Edward Cullen. I may have done terrible things but I'm not gonna srew this up too. I feel that line would be relations with students. Even recently graduated ones. I went to your profile I couldnt find the poll or I would've voted
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July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
dun dun DUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNN oh no! *home alone face* what has he found?!?!!? Poor Sissy and Drakey theyre having quite a rough time of it arent they? Don't you think you could ease up on them just a little? Cant wait for more!...oh and thanks, its nice to know my reviews are appreciated
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July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope she'll be ok even just for draco's sake. Um i might have missed it but whats the secret?
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July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heys, i like ur story, seems cool. Just wanted you to know it's Blaise ZABINI not ZaMbini...
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July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooh the plot thickens...very interesting so far. I cant wait for more...one question though, In the first chapter when Harry "fell off his broom" onto Draco is that going to be important in an it wasn't an accident kind of way?
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June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A good start, lots of hints that tantalize the reader. Continue, please!
You probably should look into a beta, don't just rely on spell-check. They are the most faulty for this kind of story.
I hope you continue to give details and try to make sure that you follow up things that deviate from canon with reasonable explanations. Nothing is worse than someone throwing in an out-of-character move or statement and expecting everyone to just accept it because it's written down.
Love this one, keep it going!
You probably should look into a beta, don't just rely on spell-check. They are the most faulty for this kind of story.
I hope you continue to give details and try to make sure that you follow up things that deviate from canon with reasonable explanations. Nothing is worse than someone throwing in an out-of-character move or statement and expecting everyone to just accept it because it's written down.
Love this one, keep it going!
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June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Please keep writing it! *Blushes* I want to know what happens!
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June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love the second chapter i wonder what's going to happen now that Draco's asked for Harry's help and what will harry do.
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June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay an update! i hope you continue to update so far this story is sounding really good and i cant wait to read more
all my love The Maiden Lyra
maiden6of6the6dark@yahoo.com
all my love The Maiden Lyra
maiden6of6the6dark@yahoo.com
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June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
first yay me for being the first to review. second the story looks like it will be really good so far. please update soon i would love to read more.
all my love The Maiden Lyra
maiden6of6the6dark@yahoo.com
all my love The Maiden Lyra
maiden6of6the6dark@yahoo.com