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person Enamoril
schedule July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I believe the healer is Apprentice Healer Varden. Why? Because she's obscure, Draco feels superior to her pillow-fluffing abilities, and she might have had a bad crush on Harry... then Harry threatened her ego by saying 'No'. Then she went absoltively crazy and worked on a way to take him down.

Doing it under Draco's nose is a bonus =3
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This might surprise you but I have been so wrapped up in "How Noble In Reason" that this lovely gem skipped my mind. This reminds me of another fic that I read on the Silver Snitch forever and a day ago, though not in the plagiarism obviously. It is just rare to find a good mystery that involves a Harry/Draco romance. I really enjoyed the fic I mentioned and I undoubtedly love this one as well. I really enjoy the depth of your writing and the slow and intensive build ups that occur in your stories are the mark of a true artist. As usual I can not wait for the next chapter and I thoroughly enjoyed this one.
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks! I'll seize upon every little clue and patiently (ha!) wait for more. I am finding Draco and Harry to be quite intriguing here. And, I'm off to reread because I cannot remember how Draco knew that Harry is allergic to poppies. :D Thanks again for sharing. PW
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I remember now! I'm becoming forgetful in my old age!
person W
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I'm fascinated by this story! It contains so many elements of crime that I just have to love it^^ (*cough* thinks of all the nights she spends in front of her TV wathing this kind of series *coughs again*)

You are so very creative with the potions and poisons and everything seems so seamless... Really a beautiful piece of writing so far!

What interests me most at the moment: Was Ron really Ron when Harry and Draco talked to him? Because if he wasn't himself (boy, that is so strange...) then the killer would know everything Harry and Draco found so far... And that would really be bad, wouldn't it?

Can't wait for more! Thanks a lot! I had a really bad day, but it just got a bit better^^
person Polka dot
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
definitely I think beign in th hospital is probably going to get Harry killed. It may draw out the killer but he's still getting poisoned and probably spied on. Might want to convelese at home.
person paigeey07
schedule July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you haven't!!! I love it!!
person nn
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nice, draco got another eyes. is it possible that sabian is pure blood but
is he from dark family? still more to find out 'n i definitely read the next chapter
person pittwitch
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Delightfully mysterious! Will, of course, look forward to reading more and watching the plot thicken. Thanks for sharing. PW
person paigeey07
schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it too much!!