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I would be interested to find out if you are going to have any more chapters on this story. Some of the chapters were pretty dark and creepy, but I am hoping that future chapters will have a brighter outlook.

Cosmyk

God, this is killing me. I mean, not in a bad way... It's how I react to anything that I really enjoy reading/watching. It kills me that Hermione has been institutionalized, but I am so glad that Draco saved her from the disgusting place. On some level I feel bad for the night keeper, but he was extremely creepy despite his good intentions. I can't wait to read more of this story!

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhohh..... this chapter is GREAT!!!! it was well worth the wait, and with the promise of chapter 8 in the making, i find myself extremely satisfied. though i must say i feel slightly sorry for the night attendant. will we ever find out his identity or anymore background information on him. and the fall out with de belleme ....ooohhhhh... that's gonna be good... i cant wait, so update soon!

I'm glad to see that this isn't abandoned. I read the first six chapters in one shot, and have been waiting patiently for an update. I love the nuance of this story, the research you've put into it. It makes it all the more disturbing.

Draco! I love that he is competent enough to know how and when to help her, and slytherin enough to know the safest time to extract her. I am curious... in this story is the condition of hysteria supposed to be actually legitimate or is it a holdover from the Victorian mindset? Is the wizarding world privy to secret knowledge or prone to hold on to false conditions in order to have that extra thumb pressing on half of the population? Either reality would be interesting.

Hermione was right in her assumption that he was doing this to her in order to write a book... her welfare be damned. And really-- it seems that this man abused her for his own benefit, almost sterilizing her. One would think that such a population deprivation would be frowned upon by the ministry. I hope Harry gets wind of it and destroys him. Or Draco, as you don't screw with a Malfoy. Or both taq team. Raped by Hagrid would be my preference, but I'm a bit bloodthirsty about these kind of things.

(Mwahahahahaha)

Oh well done. Well done Draco, and well done Lady. This had my heartrate up the entire time. Hermione is 'safe' now, but there is so much damage to be repaired. Can Draco help her? Can she come back to herself? Will de Belleme reappear (I'm sure he will)? Egad!

I am so relieved for Hermione!
She's not in that death trap any more, and Draco will surely look after her, right? <3

He's all sweet and gentle, after all.

Keep at this, it's spectacular. <3

Another amazing chapter. I cannot wait to read the next!

TY for coming back to this story......... and thank you for the rescue of Hermione.....

A horror story, that is such a accurate description, nice to have a name to put on it. Yes, I suppose I should have taken the warnings a little more seriously.
What I meant was that you could have written it someplace like LJ, and provided a link in AFF for anyone of your readers who might be interested in the story. I'm not sure I agree with myself though, I guess it depends on whether the "adult" is supposed to refer to just sex or all adult themes.

The new chapter is great, as always! "Very slowly, Hermione moved her arms and legs so that her ankles and wrists touched the bedframe." This line is so amazing and insightful!