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for Inamorato

by Pheobi

person justmine25
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love creature fics even the crack ones ..so I really like where u are goin with this one so Draco's own personal scent huh so what is harry like gonna bound to him since his smell comes naturally?
person SignoraE
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm guessing Draco's pheromones. Great original creature idea though!
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol...lmao that was such a funny and very interesting chapter i loved it, and as far as old voldy being a div it would give a stronger reason as to why he hunts our poor harry and maybe explain alittle more about there background but like i said many times before i could be way off base here....and as far as what harry was smelling i am going to say maybe the soap that draco uses to wash himself with or his natural scent or how do you say uuuummmmm the emotions forming in his magic or just his magic.....i have read that magic can give off an aura maybe it can give off a scent to..and with each person being so differnt the more unique the scent....great job
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it iissss DRACO! :P his shampoo? uhhhhh his soap?
HIS ESSENCE!
lol
its his pheromones?
lol
uhhhh

BUNNY!
that is what it is
its the bunnies
:)
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wicked Cool!!! My guess is it's Draco's own "personal" scent. and NO she hasn't told me... in fact she hasn't decided what it is yet... well NOW she has(I'm posting this late i was running errands), but when she read me Chap 5. (sorry gang I'm Chap and 1/2 ahead of you all :D) She decided while i was gone, but hasn't told me so i'm allowed to post a guess. :D
person moonlightblade
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the Draco Harry scene. Cute! It was funny how weireded out Draco was by the whole sniffing the neck escapade lol. I have no idea what it was the Harry was smelling, maybe Draco's laundrey detergent haha. I'm sure you'll have something way more unique then my guess :)

Wow.. your writing your own book! Cool :)
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
my email is storylistener@live.com and I would really like to be added to your mailing list. So far your story has intrigued me, being different from your typical "Harry-is-a-creature" stories. I also like the fact that you're telling me about a creature I've never heard about, even if you are twisting it to suit you. Wonderful Job and WRITE MORE SOON please!
person tamikolee
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, could Harry be smelling Dracos dorment Veela blood???????? Though he wasn't affected by Fluers, damn I'm stumped....It's Draco so it could be shampoo, bodywash ,moisturiser oooor Draco could have a real sweet tooth wich could make him just smell sweet lol. I can so see Harry being a pushy bottom in this story, it would be funny seeing Draco making sure he is the top and trying to keep control of situations. I am annoyed that I am away from my laptop for the next couple of days and will have to wait to read your next installment, I haven't been this excited about a story in a long time.
person Raholea
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*falls over laughing at draco/ harry interactions*

ok, so i saw you start this a while ago, and being a creature fic, i was interested, but i like waiting to see if fics like this are worth my time- ie, more than one chapter, regular updates, etc.

So i waited until the recent update.. and i'm impressed. I like what you're playing with and i like the supporting details. I just can't wait to see what else you've got in store for the loveable BWL. *huggles* good luck and hope you update soon!!!
person galaxybaby
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea what it is Harry is smelling, but I can't wait to find out! I love it when a story can capture my attention as much as yours has. It's wonderful!