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by Pheobi

person NightLo
schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...what a way to start a relationship and how true and common the problem they both face...just hope this is the starting point of getting closer to each other...
schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey hun, what an amazing thing to come home to after a long trip another great chapter! Drunkin draco is soo cute and funny, I can just picture him stumbling around talking about all the injustices (ie shopping problems, broken nails, cute gryphendors to bed, etc.) hehe... Anyways I can't wait to see if they can really get to know eachother without many more fights. :] Many cookies for another chappie please please. :) ~Bliss
person Addiena_Saffir
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay my pc is working again!!! I'm so glad your continuing this story. I was afraid that after i came back on i'd find out you weren't finishing it like so many other authors. I loved the last chappie and the one before. It's refreshing to have Ron be the supportive understanding one and Hermione go off the handle for once. lol its always the other way around. I'm glad you liked my earlier suggestions hehehehe can't wait to see if you use them or if you come up with something even cooler.
person thyladyx
schedule July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lovely chapter. I greatly enjoyed mature Draco and teary Harry. Cant waitfor more
person tamikolee
schedule July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fwew, what a fight, had me worried there lol. Great chap:)
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooo what if she is right


~eros
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"His prized Malfoy name isn't worth the breath it takes to say it anymore..."
Best line ever! I love this chapter it's my favorite. How horrible is that? I love feisty bitchy Hermione, probably because happy shiny people make me slightly nausious. Hmm- well what ever the reason this chapter is amazingness can't wait for the next. :] Sorry no update on Blessing of the Sun but soon. Have fun on your trip. ~Bliss
person NightLo
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hum...it is quite new to see Ron being the mature one than Hermione, but I agree boys will let the fights go more easily than girls, so I can see you point in this...but Hermione seems to be so so angry, what's got in her? Why is she so angry though she has her points?

BTW, she does raise good questions, how will Harry response to those?
person thyladyx
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow...I don't like this side of Hermione. Its very ugly. Have fun camping. I hope its inspiring to your writing! Can't, well techincally not cant, more like don't want to, wait for more!
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far, thanks for posting, my email is WolfPup5683@aol.com