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love love love this story! I cant wait for the next chapter please make it soon! Will Harry fall at all and have to have Draco catch him (snickers)anyways please update REALLY soon!
Kit

woot flying

I sat down on my laptop to read your story, got through the first chapter and when I clicked on the next one I actually got my lazy arse up to go to the house computer because the chapter took too long to load. Which is a huge thing for my because I really am that lazy.
You have an amazing thing going, I love how you are discriptive without being overly so; no offence to E.E. Cummings but too much detail is well, too much.
The only thing I can find falt with is how Draco talks. He uses a lot of sland words like 'cause, I can understand Harry saying it because he is laid back and didn't have a formal upbringing. Draco on the other hand had a strict childhood. That seriously is the only thing I can possibly find wrong, and seriously thats like finding out that there's an invisible scratch on the wall. It's amazing, so please, oh please, update soon.
KP

...Any more specific we need to know about Peri? Such as mating ritual or period, perhaps?

woot was wondering when the next update would be i wonder whats going to happen with hermione and i wonder how fast harry will take to learn how to use his new wings

i love the by plays between every one i hope you update soon i really love this story


all my love The Maiden Lyra
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yay!!!! update!!!!...stupid Hermione...shes supposed to be the smart one honestly. Great chapter. I love this fic so far and can not wait to see more of it...please don't take so long to update next time?p retty please with a cherry on top?

Yay, so great to get an update :)

This story is awesome. I love that you give your own spin on real lore. Not to mention I love selkies. The one thing I question though is why would Harry want to fly quidditch with his wings spread? The bludgers would be hell I'd think. I dunno. Please add me to the update list. :)

I can totally relate with wondering how scenes end up the way they do! Whenever I sit down to write, my brain just seems to take off wherever it wants to, and sometimes ends up in places I did not anticipate! But, I think that's some of the fun of creating--just going with the flow and seeing what comes out!
Thank you for the recent chapters and explaining where Draco and Harry are both coming from. This latest chapter was probably the most in-character so far, in my opinion. Now that Draco and Harry have decided to get to know each other, I bet it won't take too awful long for more passionate things to come about. ;-)