This is a pretty good start but it is very fast paced. Almost like you sat down and wrote it all out in five minutes flat. Not much meat to the story. I think it is a wonderful idea but you would go into detail a bit more. Focus on a scene instead of switching over to something else so quickly.
You did a good job describing the founders. I could get clear image of them in my head, as well as Harrys room. Everything else is a blur and easily forgotten.
According to your dates he only went back one hundred and eighteen years not one thousant years. Nice story by the way. I just found it today.
Wow it's been so long that you updated !!!! but happy to see ine,,hope to see more sooner than later !!!:):):)
I really enjoyed this story so far and I would really like to see how it progresses. I hope that you are going to complete this story. I would really like to see how you bring back Hermione, Ron, Draco and Professor Snape.