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July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know, I love it that in your stories you manage to make both Draco and Harry powerfull, despite their D/s relationship. That's quite a rare scenario to find in fanfics.
This story started very promising, you always know how to write good plot. ;D Though I'm very dissapointed that Hermione and Ron (especially Hermione, she does have a Muggle heritage and I always saw Muggles more receptive regarding these issues than wizards) aren't able to understand Harry's need to be freed of all the presurre and responsabilities, if only for a short while. Or at least, that why I think he wants to have that kind of sexual relationship. And if it keeps him sane and calm ( or as calm as Harry can be, anyway) and it doesn't harm anyone, why should it be a problem? People find release in many ways, some drink, some smoke, some shop; Harry likes to be dominated. They really should be more open-minded.
Anyway, I'm sorry for the long review, but their attitude seems like a classical case where people just don't want to understand D/s relationship, which really upsets me. Don't get me wrong, I am not critisizing your story here in any way, just how common that behaviour is in society. This is a great story and I can't wait for the next update. ;]
This story started very promising, you always know how to write good plot. ;D Though I'm very dissapointed that Hermione and Ron (especially Hermione, she does have a Muggle heritage and I always saw Muggles more receptive regarding these issues than wizards) aren't able to understand Harry's need to be freed of all the presurre and responsabilities, if only for a short while. Or at least, that why I think he wants to have that kind of sexual relationship. And if it keeps him sane and calm ( or as calm as Harry can be, anyway) and it doesn't harm anyone, why should it be a problem? People find release in many ways, some drink, some smoke, some shop; Harry likes to be dominated. They really should be more open-minded.
Anyway, I'm sorry for the long review, but their attitude seems like a classical case where people just don't want to understand D/s relationship, which really upsets me. Don't get me wrong, I am not critisizing your story here in any way, just how common that behaviour is in society. This is a great story and I can't wait for the next update. ;]
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July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #2...
1. What....how...WHERE in the world did you come
up with a name like Wimpledink??? Do you realize
how much FUN I can have with a name like that?
Oh, the possibilities...the VULGAR possibilities!
2. My..my. I do believe this chapter defined the term, 'You
can cut the tension in the air with a knife.' I liked how you
manifested Harry's powers in this one, but then again I know
how much you like a big, strong....Harry. ^__^
3. I have a question, have you ever done a story where Harry
hasn't seen Ron & Hermione for whatever reasons in years and
unbeknownst to them Harry & Draco had begun corresponding
and became close acquaintances, of sorts.
Harry has been called in to help them with a problem and has
called in Draco for his expertise, which Ron & hermione are
oblivious to this small fact. So, when Draco shows up, Ron acts
up...and thinks Harry will do the same, but gets a shock when
he sees how friendly Harry & Draco are acting. Plus, a bigger
shock when he hears they've hung out together, too.
Anyway, have you done anything like that?
1. What....how...WHERE in the world did you come
up with a name like Wimpledink??? Do you realize
how much FUN I can have with a name like that?
Oh, the possibilities...the VULGAR possibilities!
2. My..my. I do believe this chapter defined the term, 'You
can cut the tension in the air with a knife.' I liked how you
manifested Harry's powers in this one, but then again I know
how much you like a big, strong....Harry. ^__^
3. I have a question, have you ever done a story where Harry
hasn't seen Ron & Hermione for whatever reasons in years and
unbeknownst to them Harry & Draco had begun corresponding
and became close acquaintances, of sorts.
Harry has been called in to help them with a problem and has
called in Draco for his expertise, which Ron & hermione are
oblivious to this small fact. So, when Draco shows up, Ron acts
up...and thinks Harry will do the same, but gets a shock when
he sees how friendly Harry & Draco are acting. Plus, a bigger
shock when he hears they've hung out together, too.
Anyway, have you done anything like that?
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June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting idea, and believable back story. Would love to read more.
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June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved it :) update soon sil vous plait :Dxx
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June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm...I'm feeling a little outraged that the
Ministry is actually that prejudiced to even THINK
about getting rid of a House simply based on the
fact that a majority of witches & wizards who joined
Old Snake Face were from Slytherin!
Well hell, that House wasn't the only one!
..and basically, it's the negative circumstances and environment
within the school that affects how a child grows that nurtures
that seed of wanting acceptance and recognition without being
looked down on. Doesn't EXACTLY make them the freakin' scourge
of the Wizarding World, thank you very much!
Okay, and I went completely left field from one simple
paragraph. Damn...
Ministry is actually that prejudiced to even THINK
about getting rid of a House simply based on the
fact that a majority of witches & wizards who joined
Old Snake Face were from Slytherin!
Well hell, that House wasn't the only one!
..and basically, it's the negative circumstances and environment
within the school that affects how a child grows that nurtures
that seed of wanting acceptance and recognition without being
looked down on. Doesn't EXACTLY make them the freakin' scourge
of the Wizarding World, thank you very much!
Okay, and I went completely left field from one simple
paragraph. Damn...
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June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this!!! It has the makings of a story that I have been craving for a ridiculous time now, but sadly hasn't seen. Until this that is. I have already fallen off my seat in anticipation of what is to come next. Keep up the amazing writing.
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yessss a new story! I cant wait to see what happens when the boys meet up in Hogwarts! It will be interesting what arguement happened between Harry Ron and Hermione that split them apart. Lastly I do hope that Harry is the Dom in the story since there aren't that many but even if he isn't i know this will still be an awesome read. Hope you update soon. Keep up the great work.
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it!
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can see Harry and Hermione getting into a fight over Hogwarts but not Ron. He must be one whipped hubby.
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story as usual, I look forward to the rest! =)