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for Chosen Chains

by Lomonaaeren

person purple-er
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! more chapters. And very interesting reference to Snape having a thing for harry's mother, and therefore harry. not mentioned enough in the fanfic world, in my opinion. :P
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 5!!!
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Incredible! You are very skilled at writing plot and character interactions!
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 6!!!
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes I did actually lol. Part of it I figured out before I read this chapter. The part about Venus. And then I Figured out about the centaur and the clearing while I was reading. They kept talking about magical beasts with four legs and eight and something in my head clicked and said centaur and then I thought of the clearing. I didn't think I'd figure it out, but I'm happy I did. And now I'm curios as hell about the next one to see if I can do it again =) Thanks for writing such a great story and doing such a great job as always!! =)
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Harry is being an idiot. There was this one person I once knew who was into certain things their family had raised them to believe were wrong and sinful. That what they was doing was terrible. They would wait till the very last moment to do something about it when they were so angry with themselves and the world around them. It took one person who loved them dearly to make them realize what they thought was wrong was a part of them and that they needed to except it. Now they live a happily 'normal' life going to bed at night with their hands tied. I hope this is where you are going with Harry. I hope you make Harry finally realize that he would have wanted this even if he had lived a 'normal' life and that this is just part of him.
In the BDSM community a lot of people use bondage and certain scenes as a form of therapy, because in reality it is. In a scene it is the only place your deepest secrets can be laid out in a safe sane environment. It allows you to realize that yes I had a bad day today and now I want you to tie me up so that I can relax and trust that you will take care of me.
I hope my ramblings made sense.
Update soon,
KP
person Caldonya
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So I am enjoying this story another one well done I think. I was wondering if it was harder for you to write as it is something different from what you normally do. In being specifically bdsm ish? I did notice a tad longer between posts between the last two chapters and was wondering if that was the cause?
person purple-er
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay! been waiting for an update for ages!!! awesome, great, great sex.
can't wait to see the next chappie.
person tyree
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Normally I dont read s&m shit....however I should have known that if I did it would be written by you....I know I've told you in the past but you are the master of your domain...your simply awesome...I love your writting... And this fic right here is the fing bomb...like really the shit. Can I be on you mailing list if you have one.....Again your awesome keep up the great work.(Not that it would be hard for you)
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very INTENSE and EMOTIONAL here! I LOVE it haha! Excellent work, I can't wait to see what else you have planned!