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September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've been catching up on my fan fiction addiction and just got to this one! I am so happy that you've decided to do a story where Draco is dominant (or, I hope that he stays dominant). I love all your stories, but I must admit that I truly love to read a story with a dominant Draco.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 7!!!
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September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Very intense, and you can feel the emotions between all the characters. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens!
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September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit this one threw me off. At first I thought it was going to be something in the Room of Requirement, but that seemed a little to obvious so I settled for one of the common rooms. Either Ravenclaw, Hufflepuff, or Slytherin. Not really Gyffindor becuase nothing in the riddle or any of the conversations suggested anything to do with it. It was very nicely done and I'm eager to see what the next one is so I can try to figure it out. Great job lol!! =)
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August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I see a happy ending looming
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August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #6...
Either I'm a slow reader or that was a LONG ass chapter. Good Lord! O_O
Anyway...
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1. Okay, I'm guessing 'baby steps' for Harry, as he tries to get over his
...problem?..and try to have SOME type of understanding with the Weasels.
But, it was good to see him come alive again towards the end of the chapter.
I didn't realize I missed that boyish enthusiasm[sp?] and the way he comes alive
when facing a threat.
2. I, also, realized how much I missed seeing Draco & Harry duel together! That
was fun to read....sadistic, but fun! :-)
Either I'm a slow reader or that was a LONG ass chapter. Good Lord! O_O
Anyway...
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1. Okay, I'm guessing 'baby steps' for Harry, as he tries to get over his
...problem?..and try to have SOME type of understanding with the Weasels.
But, it was good to see him come alive again towards the end of the chapter.
I didn't realize I missed that boyish enthusiasm[sp?] and the way he comes alive
when facing a threat.
2. I, also, realized how much I missed seeing Draco & Harry duel together! That
was fun to read....sadistic, but fun! :-)
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August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work here as always! Love finding an update from you :)
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August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So...this is Harry's real problem...not very pathological to me...just needing some realization!
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August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this chapter surprised me...
I don't know, I think it's too much a coincidence, that Dumbledore chose a centaur with arrows of darkness as the keeper of the riddle. Perhaps he wanted Harry to face his dark side so that he could heal??
And I applaud Draco: I would never have found the solution to this riddle! And I applaud you, because I don't know how you manage to come up with them!!!
As for Harry, I'm really surprised. I didn't think he would refuse Draco so adamantly when he so obviously needed his little session...
I'm really glad you posted this story, because it's new and beautifully written and catches its readers from the first moment onward^^ I like it and can't wait for the next chapter!
I don't know, I think it's too much a coincidence, that Dumbledore chose a centaur with arrows of darkness as the keeper of the riddle. Perhaps he wanted Harry to face his dark side so that he could heal??
And I applaud Draco: I would never have found the solution to this riddle! And I applaud you, because I don't know how you manage to come up with them!!!
As for Harry, I'm really surprised. I didn't think he would refuse Draco so adamantly when he so obviously needed his little session...
I'm really glad you posted this story, because it's new and beautifully written and catches its readers from the first moment onward^^ I like it and can't wait for the next chapter!
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August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Deep. Self-loathing really seems to be Harry's forte though, he's just not good at letting himself be human and accept inner facets of himself. I'm sure being called a freak by the Dursley's didn't help that. Absolutely fantastic job on this!