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for Chosen Chains

by Lomonaaeren

schedule November 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Different! I liked it!
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Truly an amazing story! I was enthralled from the beginning!
person fudge
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
one of your best stories!
person Christine
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this story! So different and ultimately fresh compared to the stories I have been reading recently. The only thing I had a problem, if you can really call it a problem..., is that the story of Annie was never really resolved. I would have liked to see a scene of Harry returning to her house and her deciding to come to Hogwarts or something. Even a scene where she's like, "Heck no, I don't want to be a witch." would have been good.

:) I wish you luck in all your future writing endeavors!
person AoiNikko
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay you finished! I was very fond of this story, so I remember squirming a lot waiting for it. But it was alright, I wanted your best more than I wanted a fast update. And I was not disappointed! I could really feel Harry's struggle to get past his self loathing, and Draco was amusing in his trying to help him. But he was still as gentle as Draco could be. The portraits were fun too, I loved the interaction with them. I get so deep into your stories, they always take me by surprise when they--or the chapter--are over. ^_^ I feel inspired for the first time in...man, it's been years. Only one other author has been able to do that, really. Thanks for being so great~! ^_^
person purple-er
schedule October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the way Draco dispenses of the Covington problem - quickly and efficiently, no mess. :)
schedule October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so glad you got back to this one, great story all around. good work with all the emotional complexities. maybe you can do a oneshot or follow up to it some time of them once they've more or less settled down together. great job, keep up the good work :)
person polka dot
schedule October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I gotta think that potion will eventually wear off and Covington will do something to Draco, but she deserved it. I'm liked the ending I think it was sweet but leaves a lot of possibilities open.
person Word_Slave
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I wanted to tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. I loved "love free as air" (I would have loved another sex scene... Maybe one with just Severus and Harry and then with Malfoy and Harry?) Anyway, sorry got carried away. I hardly EVER read Drarry. There is a quality in this that feels so damn real. I desperately needed something to take my mind off RL. The quality in craft and the weaving of the characters is so amazing. Thank you!
schedule September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story and I look forward to when you update with your next chapter.