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June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely and you definitely made something which appears quite often in fan fiction, your own. Your characterisation of Harry is particularly good and I liked the inclusion of the children.
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure I've read this somewhere before - but it's a great little tale and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Nice one!!
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was great-- totally loved it! Awww, poor Harry, has to wait so long to get true passion in his life cuz of Ginny's selfishness....
The part with the kids was especially nice, it must be a lot of fun to play around with them since we don't know much about them and can make them into whatever works best for a plot.
AND hot sex too-- always a plus! Well written, great job! :)
The part with the kids was especially nice, it must be a lot of fun to play around with them since we don't know much about them and can make them into whatever works best for a plot.
AND hot sex too-- always a plus! Well written, great job! :)