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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YEAH a new chapter! :) thank you! for posting, for reading the review and acually reading after know that (i feel like a real idot-thanks again for reading it.) you are a writer so of course you would know that so thanks for writing back! :) i do hope that you will post reguarly for us now that you are some chapters ahead ;)
(like once a week--please!!) also i dont care if you end up with a 100+ chapters cause when you get a great story like this you want it long and enjoyable (which i know you will do so please just keep going!) also loved the little spanking bit with hermione and fenrir! ;) hope to read more form you soon, real soon!!! :)
(like once a week--please!!) also i dont care if you end up with a 100+ chapters cause when you get a great story like this you want it long and enjoyable (which i know you will do so please just keep going!) also loved the little spanking bit with hermione and fenrir! ;) hope to read more form you soon, real soon!!! :)
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update ASAP!!!!!!!!!! LOVE this story!!! its such an interesting story and i would have not minded if it had threesome in it. keep up the good work
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
okay i am loving the story!!! but i am dying for an update! :)
hey i dont know how you are going to write the (for a lack of better words...) sex but i would like to bring up one thing that most people leave out (either cause they dont think about or dont want to or like the taught...but i will bring it up cause i do and it is up to you and what you want if you put it in.). werewolfs are wolfs that just turn into humans and vise-versa but what i would like to point out is that like dogs wolfs have a sexual tie or knot when the have sex with their mates. now i would love to see but also i wanted to remind you or let you know and if you are intrested in this also that you look at this website: www.wolfcountry.net/information/WolfReproduction.html
it talks about all the things there that i thaught really intresting in their mating habbits. okay hopefully i was not too annoying or what not but thanks for reading. :)
(who knows maybe you might put some of that in with the normal human side of our werewolfs for all i know it might have permently changed that part of them as well as many of the other stuff.) ;) until next chapter my dear! :)
hey i dont know how you are going to write the (for a lack of better words...) sex but i would like to bring up one thing that most people leave out (either cause they dont think about or dont want to or like the taught...but i will bring it up cause i do and it is up to you and what you want if you put it in.). werewolfs are wolfs that just turn into humans and vise-versa but what i would like to point out is that like dogs wolfs have a sexual tie or knot when the have sex with their mates. now i would love to see but also i wanted to remind you or let you know and if you are intrested in this also that you look at this website: www.wolfcountry.net/information/WolfReproduction.html
it talks about all the things there that i thaught really intresting in their mating habbits. okay hopefully i was not too annoying or what not but thanks for reading. :)
(who knows maybe you might put some of that in with the normal human side of our werewolfs for all i know it might have permently changed that part of them as well as many of the other stuff.) ;) until next chapter my dear! :)
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, especially the Hermione-centric chapters (I'm not a big fan of slash). I can't wait until she 'accepts her wolf'. I'd like it if she comes to revel in her sex kitten/pup role, and manages to twist Fenrir, Yorik, and the other dominant males around her little finger.
I liked the cuddling with Yorik in this chapter. I hope Fenrir is not too possessive!
Please post the next chapter soon! Yours is one of the very few stories that I get excited about seeing updates.
I liked the cuddling with Yorik in this chapter. I hope Fenrir is not too possessive!
Please post the next chapter soon! Yours is one of the very few stories that I get excited about seeing updates.
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooh, I loved this chapter, it was like play date for the subs! hilarious. :) I also enjoyed the little "moment" between Hermione and her beta. good times. can't wait to read more. :)
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please continue to update! I'm really enjoying your writing
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September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi dear
Don't worry about placing of your story in the wrong section. This site is full of wrong placements and fake warnings. This must be the case when people start writing, have no idea if they maybe feel the urge to write something that demands a warning and start issuing warnings without ever getting to the point.
This story is very nicely taught and has a great story in the background. I don't think there will be too much drama, but it's certainly not just a simple PWP just for the sake of sex. I love to see the OC and the new characters interacting and the fears of Neville and Hermione. They are not just jumping into the new lifestyle and having fun, they have fears and doubts but a strong will to live. I'm also glad of the point you maketo show the difference between the straight out heroism which is normally getting the heroes killed and the sly survivor tactic and the clever art of bravery that involves being brave when you have a chance to reach the goal you seek and staying behind when you can't protect everybody.
Please keep on going!
Don't worry about placing of your story in the wrong section. This site is full of wrong placements and fake warnings. This must be the case when people start writing, have no idea if they maybe feel the urge to write something that demands a warning and start issuing warnings without ever getting to the point.
This story is very nicely taught and has a great story in the background. I don't think there will be too much drama, but it's certainly not just a simple PWP just for the sake of sex. I love to see the OC and the new characters interacting and the fears of Neville and Hermione. They are not just jumping into the new lifestyle and having fun, they have fears and doubts but a strong will to live. I'm also glad of the point you maketo show the difference between the straight out heroism which is normally getting the heroes killed and the sly survivor tactic and the clever art of bravery that involves being brave when you have a chance to reach the goal you seek and staying behind when you can't protect everybody.
Please keep on going!
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September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love this story!
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September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! This story just gets better and better. I like that you are taking the time to develop plot and characters. Awesome Job.
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September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am definitely still with you! I enjoy the Neville side story, please don't feel like you have to leave some of it out! I love what you've done with all the characters, and the intrigue among the different ranks and packs and such is really interesting. Can't wait to read more!