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I really liked the Hermione and Yorik interaction - so hot!

I can see both Hermione and Neville's "wolf" is coming out.

Please update again soon!

So, I found I have Nerve issues in my toes, and that makes me realize you wrote an awesome good chapter/story/porn. Great job I will read the next chapter with bated breathe to see what happens with Hermione and Fenrir!

Just finished reading from the beginning, what a HOT story! I love the world you've created and your original characters are awesome! I'm glad Hermione and Yoric got to have some fun, I'm really starting to love him!
I don't mind that the story doesn't always focus on Fenrir and Hermione. I really like your scenes with the other pack members as well. I can't wait to keep reading!

oh my G O D!!!!! I did not see that coming!!!! Is Yorik going to be a menace in this story? Or a dashing addition to hermiones little situation? I cant believe i have to wait!!!! Please update ASAP once a day is not enough! Be fair to your loyal readers lol. All the best from the U.K

oooh, that was hot! you're terrible, ending on a cliffhanger like that! I love that Hermione is warming up to Yorik, and it was awesome how hard he was trying not to go too far with her...I seriously cannot wait for Hermione's first time with her alpha now!!!

I also really enjoyed the scene with Neville. I love how you write both of them slowly beginning to recognize and react to their wolfish instincts. Really great!

Can't wait to read more!

There were many, many things I loved about this chapter. A few faves:

Severus: "We need to do it to make you survive." LOL, this is such a 'guy' thing to say.

Fenrir AND Yorik beating off to fantasies about Hermione, while she, totally clueless, sleeps on. (BTW, I really hope that we get to read about Yorik's fantasy coming true!)

Hermione cunningly, if unconsciously, manipulating Yorik to call him by his name instead of his title.

Yorik, ecstatic that he gets full-on, naked frottage when he only hoped for above-the-waist petting, thinks that Fenrir will praise him for getting her off. I hope that he is right; I love the Yorik character and his interactions with Hermione, and hope to read more.

I'm glad to see that Neville's and Hermione's inner wolves are coming out to play. I can't wait to read your next chapter!

I smile every time I see you've added a chapter. Thank you!

update update update! I cannot stress enough how much your story is amazing! Im sitting on a pin cushion eagerly awaiting your next installment! Cant wait to see what happens with hermione and Fenrir next! ALl the best from the U.K oxox

Keep it going! Can't wait for the next chapter :)

I'm still interested. I really like this story.