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Wow, that was fantastic! You honestly had me worried for a little there...I love how Neville and Draco were there to comfort her and were worried. I love this story and I can't wait to read what comes next! Let me know if you need help with beta-ing, I'd be happy to help.

Wow, I really enjoyed the last couple of chapters. You had me worried! If you need a native english speaker to look over your chapters I'd be happy to make corrections for you. Even with your current beta there are still a lot of basic mistakes. I'm not perfect with commas, but I am very good with sentence structure, spelling and paragraph presentation. Email me at ladydagger27@yahoo.com if you need some help.

I was scared for awhile there! I thought Hermione wasn't going to embrace her inner wolf. I also thought that you were going to say Fenrir had killed Rorik, so that's good he's still alive. Poor Neville and Draco! They were so scared! And I'd like to see Severus get his hands on Hermione at some point too, as that is my favorite pairing anyway. Just glad her and Fenrir are together and happy now!

I will wait with bated breath, forever if necessary, for each chapter. We only want them faster, because we devour them. Much like Fenrir wants to devour Hermoine...all in a good way.

I was nearly in tears during most of this chapter. My heart leapt in my chest when she screamed his name.

And although I love the smut, I must admit, that just kissing for over an hour and a half...sure sounded good to me.

As alway, your humble reader awaits the next chapter to be beta'd.

What an emotional, gut-wrenching chapter. Poor Hermione. Poor Fenrir. (Poor all of them!)

I'm so glad that they each had a breakthrough, Hermione in accepting the wolf in herself and her role in the pack, and Fenrir in caring for her feelings and not just her body. I look forward to your next chapter! (I hope that Yorik is OK!)

Is this story ever going to be updated again? :(

Love how you write werewolves. :) Neville was fantastic in this chapter, I love seeing him finally accept his wolf. Can't wait to read Hermione's bit!

I thought you said you had 30 chapters already done. I'm dying to see how this ends up

please update soon

this story is fantastic!!! it makes me all hot and bothered. please please, i beg of you update soon!!! *pout and innocent face*

This story's amazing (: Please update soon! Would love to read the next chapter.