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by grugster

person A
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! Can't wait to read more. So you have many chapters of the sequel written all ready?! You cruel, cruel author to not bestow them upon us right now! lol. looking forward to the sequel with much anticipation.
person circe266
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, that last chapter was very sexy. I am so looking forward to your sequel!

LOL, I love the bonobo analogy. I can't wait to read your Hermione hooking up with Yorik, Severus, and other dominants.
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! This is an incredible story, I am glad that you will be continuing it.

I LOVED the counting, that was great. Now I just have to wait to find out about her passing out?!?!?!

I know, I am never happy. Only because, I love your writing!!!
person MJ
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I really liked the conflict in both of them. Hermione torn between wanting and being scared and Fenrir torn between doing what Hermione wanted and what she needed. And of course, great smut!!
I think you probably ended at the right time. I understand you want to change categories and this is probably the best place to do so. Maybe the ending is abrupt, but considering the sequel is close by, it doesn't really matter
person colao
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved it and can't wait for more!!!
person circe266
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, Neil said she had 3 mates ... is that Severus as well as Fenrir and Yorik?

I am looking forward to the next chapter with Hermione & Fenrir. And I can't wait to read any sequel that includes her hooking up with Yorik and Severus (especially Yorik -- YUM!)

schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and every chapter as always. I will eagerly watch for the final chapters and the sequels.

Your dialog is wonderful. I got all hot and bothered by Yorik's comments to Hermoine about his plans for her in the future *fanning the flush that was brought to my face*

Also, Hermoine's sense of independance is and will only get her more spankings. But I suspect that she really does like them, subconsiously at least *wink, evil smirk*

As always, more...PLEASE!!
person colao
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
still love it and look forward to the sequels!
person April
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!
schedule November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
finally! i was so worried she was gonna die!