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by grugster

person xoburntofferings
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Please more chapters. I can't get enough....very awesome story.
schedule August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story gets better and better! I always get so excited when there's a new chapter. You write so prettily, it's great! I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Love it. Keep it coming! I can't wait to see how Hermione reacts when she realizes the control she has over them!
person Molly
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i lov this story!
person colao
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Still enjoying your story. Please continue!
person theotherchick
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't review much on this site...but I really like this story. I have always seen Hermione as a potential submissive. Her obsessive need for approval is one clear indicator. I have some issues with the Sev/Nev pairing, but can see Nev as a sub as well. The kindness of a female packmate will go a long way towards Hermione's acceptance...good show! I love the clueless inexperience of Fenrir as he navigates the minefield that is his new "pup". I have had issues with the weres being under Moldyshort's control and this view of an independent but aligned were "nation" works well.

Thanks for the frequent updates. *smooch*
person Morbid Motley
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i really hope u continue this story and update soon. I love this
person Molly
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i really lov this story please review!!!
person Xoburntofferings
schedule August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I loved the chapter. I can't wait for the next one.
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, just wanted to let you know that you're doing well with the story. Also, and I hate to bring this up, but I think the word you wanted was, "Nipple" not "Nibble". Judging from how you misspelled it, chances are that you have dyslexic tendencies or are in fact dyslexic. If that's the case, you might think about having a beta reader to help you with errors of this nature in the future. Good job and hope to see a new update soon.