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by grugster

person Citten
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i just found the story and i love it!!! i love hermione and fenrir stories i just hate that there arent more stories written on them! :) so i am SO happy that you are writing it and in english to boot espically sense you said that it is not your first language--so thank you!! :) i also think that you should not worry about writing some of your slash parts too i am enjoying reading some of it though i am not usually into that. i also am so looking forward to what hermione will do now, i really hope that she will go right to fenrir and be comforted by him and not scared but this is your story and i am just hoping that you will be posting and soon i am just dying to read more and i do hope lots more! i am so enjoying the story!! and i just know that you can make it nice and long with what both hermione and neville's adjustments and maybe even lots more with other problems arising like voldemort not being satified with how things are with them! ;) anyways i am just trying to give you more ideas about how to make things even longer! cause face it i dont get to read very many stories with these two as a couple! :) i do hope that you will be posting regularly i will be watching and waiting for more! PLEASE post soon!!!!!!!!!
person Amanda
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Can't wait for more!
person dragonbud
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please keep up the good work I'm looking forward to new chaps(:
person Molly
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i think this story is going into an interesting direction! i love it please update soon!
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. But the more I read of it, the more I get the feeling it's in the wrong section. If it was more centered strictly on Hermione and Fenrir, I could see it being here no problem. But that isn't the case at all, as the focus is it appears to be on multiple pairings. You might think about moving it if you could over to the threesomes/moresomes category. Good story, wrong area.
schedule August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to think of this chapter. But it's just me; I was never a real fan of Draco. And I'd love for Severus to do the deed with Neville first. Maybe they can still be like together, even if Severus must agree to share him with the other werewolves.
person leewrites
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
just read the last chapter with draco and neville. it is safe to say that super subs belong to everyone in the clan and can not have a mate. they can be sold if they do not have sex with dominants. they have physical needs to pleasure dominants sexually only. they are only seen and treated as sexual toys. no emotional attachments for them. i can see a lonely life for neville and draco. i mean hermione will be isolated with fenir and the boys only have each other for friendship only because they can not mate and be a family, jumping from bed to different bed each night. everyone else views them a pretty wet holes to fill. and still no one allows herminone and neville proper time to mourn the deaths of their friends from the same creatures. yeah they are alive and have physically changed, but feelings and memories are still with them and to just put that aside just dosen't seem right.
person colao
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
definitly still interested...eagerly awaiting more
person xoburntofferings
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter. I am so glad that you are continuing with the story.
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
God, this is just... eeeeck! I know urine stinks very long time, but having to stand someones pee in the own hair... I'd puke!