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Love this story :) though I skipped the slash stuff.

I suppose I should have stopped and reviewed earlier but I was so engaged in this fascinating story that I didn't want to stop between chapters. You've created a completely new magic world! There are complex new rules and hierarchies and characters and magical abilities. If you changed the main characters' names this is different and creative enough to stand on its own as a fantasy novel, not just as a fan fiction. However, that being said, I love Hermione in this new role as 'pup'. Happy, sweet Draco is a real treat, and so is Snape as a kind protector of Neville. Fabulous story with great sex scenes and fascinating plot and characterizations. I'm eager to move on to the sequel.

loved it!!!!

I loved this story but had serious problems witht the last chapter! the format was awful and made it very hard to read. OF course I suffered through it because your story is fab and i have been waiting for the smut! lol can't wait to read part 2 but please fix the last chapter's format!

Love the story. Can't wait to read part two!!!

hey
peeking out from behind the chair.

it was a great chp I giggled I turned red it was hot but I couldn't figure out how to hide my face and read at the same time lol

so to make it short I loved it. great job!

Oh my goodness he peed on her !!! I loved it it was awful and great at the same time!

Wow. I must admit that when I read the summary for this story, I passed it over. When I saw it again, I thought I'd read the first chapter and give the story a chance. I am so glad that I did. Your writing is excellent and captivating even with the "word usage" errors. They were not bad enough to detract from the story. I would have never guessed that English wasn't your first language. You have created such a unique werewolf society. It is fascinating. I don't usually enjoy slash stories as many are like the big gay fairy went around hitting everyone with fairy dust. I don't have a problem with slash when it's a true part of the story instead of just embedded porn. You have done that by creating a believable society that has it's own rules and mythos separate from the muggle and wizarding worlds. I can't wait for the continuation.

Please tell me you are going to update this story in the upcoming future?! It is one of the best Hermione/Fenrir tales I have read and it makes me want to weep that it may go unfinished...pretty please? :))))

Very good story! I'm absolutely addicted =) Can't wait to read the sequel!