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by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
by the way, hope it was the new email because the old
one should be discontinued.
schedule September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch24: Interesting how Lopez's influence she now seems to have with Draco. I wonder it the eyes and limbs on the beast are from its victims... Maybe they can get Draco's eyes back... I forget if they killed it or just scared it away.
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 25!!! What will they find out?
person qwerty
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I made you laugh but honestly sometimes I just shake my head at Harry.
Great chapter!
person SP777
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #23...

I have to agree with Draco on the Holder/Robards, which I
had wanted to mention last time before I was unable to review,
what Harry did was a HUGE leap of faith on his part. Just hope
it doesn't bite him in the end.

As for Raverat, I STILL don't know what to make of him. So, we'll
see if he can redeem himself.

..and I hope they can do something about Draco's eye.

PS-I wasn't going to say anything but did you ever see the email
I sent you 2 weeks ago?
person qwerty
schedule September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG WHY IS HARRY SO DUMB??! ARGH!
/sigh/
They could have used the book for something WAY better than just covering up Draco's eye. Sheesh, now that cat is out of the bag AND Harry talked about the balls of nothingness. Whatever leverage they had over Holder is gone. Harry acted ALONE once more and gave up all the hard-earned info they had in less than 5 minutes.
Though I can kinda see Harry's reasoning for using the book for blackmail (I completely disagree with it however, the book should have been saved for something else), but what was the reason to talk about the balls of nothingness? Holder said it herself that she was checkmated even before that.
Damn Harry, leave the strategy thinking to Draco. Better yet, the comitatus. Just stop acting alone!

OK, rant against Harry is over lol

In all seriousness, I realized that Harry is super panicked and blames himself for Draco's lost eye. That's the reason why is acted so irrational. And yes, he had a brief moment of reflection before going to Holder. But that moment of reflection was all of 2 minutes and he didn't consult anyone else.
/sigh/
Oh Harry.

Great chapter!!
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24 please!!!!
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch23: Oh my... Harry's taking a big step and making a huge choice that will affect everyone. I wonder hoe Draco will react... I think it would be cool to get Draco a magic eye. I'm a little worried about Holder's response.
person anonanon
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating once more, please do so again when you have the opportunity to do so.
person SP777
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About #23...

I tried to review this the day before and it wouldn't come up.
Now I forgot what I said yesterday.

Anyway it was a good chapter...and I think Draco is doing a good job
with...suppressing.