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by Lomonaaeren

person polka dot
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's weird that Lopez and her order did the fixing. I mean she's a healer but her order is a bunch of necromancer killers. Not really health personnel.
schedule October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch29: It's good that Draco made his point. For Herricks, he needs to learn not to dish it out if he can't take it. Yay, Draco!
person MewMew2
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job! The ending of the chapter was absolutely fantastic, please update once more when you have the chance.
person SP777
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #...

Hahaha! Way to go Draco! Though I wished for
a bit more humilation, I'll take this. :-)

Herricks and others need to realize he is NOT
just Draco Malfoy, he IS a Malfoy. Deviousness runs
in that bloodline.

SO, when will Draco get his eye?

Oh, another thing...I like how realistic
Harry & Draco relationship is, no constant
lovey-dovey mess from them, just two young
men trying to cope with each other differences
and...quirks? Do they have any you can think
of?
person qwerty
schedule October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! I really liked how you put Hendricks in his place.
Great chapter!
person Mehla_Seraphim
schedule October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Indeed he did. Very well done hehe. Now I'm just excited to have Draco get his new eye. Wonder what sort of properties it'll have to it other than being glowy~
person polka dot
schedule October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know what will make Herricks feel better. A big bag of candy corn. works for me.
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CH#28: Oh, every move Draco makes is calculated, of course.

Oh Harry losing his cool, but nothing go blown up. *pout* Interesting chapter. You're making me like Lopez, he personality works well and like Draco's.
person Mehla_Seraphim
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ugh...Can Herricks have an embarrassing injury? Like oh I dunno, a hemorrhoid that sings? Man,when you want to write a annoying character you sure know what to do. I kinda hope that he gets snubbed, or that Venatus beats the crap out of him or asks for a less stupid partner. Or maybe Hermoine slapping him. I actually can't remember if Herricks has even really done anything. Why would he think he could lead? That chowderhead.

Yay for the silver glowy eye! Hope we get to see it in action soon.
person SP777
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #2_...

1. Is the look of that magical eye equivalent to
a glass eye? That is if they still make glass eyes.
I have an old fashioned way of thinking.

Will it have special properties like Moody's eye?

2. I say AGAIN...never liked Herricks, never will.
He's a weak link in the group and was never interested
in TRYING to work with those, despite his feelings.

I say kill him off. :-)