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for Seasons of War

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
..and I agree with Mehla_S's comment...WHERE is
that patronus of Draco's?
person Mehla_Seraphim
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey...I hadn't thought about it in well...months, but Draco was supposed to be learning a patronus wasn't he? Still plan on having him make one? Making a patronus is a bit like creation magic I would think.
person SP777
schedule November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #33..

Okay, I admit..I'm going to have to reread Ventus'
explanation one more time to wrap my head around
it.

But, I'm glad there is some type of solution being
revealed.
person polka dot
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
haha Draco's so pouty
person qwerty
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHH! Nihil! The description of how Harry felt when he saw Nihil's face was amazing!
Great chapter!
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch32: Is it really an attack or a nightmare? Physical or real? Interesting fight.
person SParker
schedule November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #32...

You know, as I sit and read this chapter I can't help
BUT comment...is this the direction you wanted to go
in?

Because, if I were to read the first story and this one,
you have completely gone in a slightly different direction.

No, there's nothing wrong with it, I just want to know
do you have a solution already in mind for the end?
person SParker
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #...

Say...are you any closer to a solutions to their
problem or are you winging it as you go?
person MewMew2
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job! I really feel for Draco in that he felt that by not letting him alone see the vision from the mirror, that his sacrifice did not carry the purpose and weight that it would have had Harry not been able to see it as well. Being forced to give up something, and getting little in return is never a pleasant thought nor reality should that be the case. Thank you for updating once more, please do so again when you have the opportunity.
person SP777
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #30..

1. Portillo Lopez gave him a strange blance.