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for Seasons of War

by Lomonaaeren

person polka dot
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a cute day in the life of our main characters. I like that Harry our hero just up and kicked the guy in the knee. THat can cripple if you do it right.
schedule June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch3: So, it's tough love training. Knock them down and see if they can get up? So they need to learn spells they don't know... Draco did want to learn more powerful spells, this is his chance to look for them himself. I don't like Holder, but that's probably because I'm not suppose to...

person SP777
schedule June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #3...

Is it me or does Holder have some type of
death wish? O_o

I honestly can't wait to see Draco put that
borderline psycho in her place.

By the way, with all this talk about Nihil,
what about Nasquam...and the other, Nemo?
schedule June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch2: Wow, tense chapter. I love how they work together but don't blindly follow one another. I'm glad their group hasn't fallen completely apart. I'm interested in who the other three have been partnered up with in their training.
person SP777
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #2...

*looks at authoress* Sooo...I am getting the feeling Draco's
explanation of why he wants to lead is for people who can't
see him in that role?

Personally, for me, it's weird to see, considering how...well
I don't want to call him cowardly, but, when he was younger,
I think he was a little, I don't know....soft?

...and now, it's like he's finally grown up. I think that's what it
is, Draco Malfoy has finally grown up and it's going to take some
getting used to.

NOW, Harry needs to grow a little bit more, I still see him as
a teenager plowing through decisions and flying by the seat of
his pants. How will he grow up? Will he become the rock for
Draco in a role of reversal? AND stop doubting himself and
become a young man who is sure of himself?

After all, this is a powerful young man, whether he wants to
admit or not.

Now, as for Hermione, I agree with Draco, she IS getting
annoying. She overthinks s*** too much!

As for the question of torture, it's a rather simple question
with a hard answer, with the answer not being black & white,
but shades of grey. If I needed to use torture to get information
out of someone I would, but I wouldn't constantly use it, especially
out on the battle field like a maniac to get quick results.

Plus, whether or not, you succumb to using such methods depends
on your strength of character.

So, who among them is strong?
person Polka dot
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no now Draco is going to be associated with Dick Cheney in my head. That's true evil.
person Toddy
schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked Ceremonies of strife very much. Thank you for writing them. I am now looking forward to Seasons of War. This first chapter bodes well.
person polka dot
schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh the agony of war. Thank goodness he's got his own house elf. Th
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Poor Harry can't wrap his head around Lopez's theories. Interesting theory on Return.

I really wanted to see Draco use some torture spells on Holder... I'm glad he found someone more focused on torturing Nihil and not Harry.
person qwerty
schedule June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Super excited for this last installment! Already looking good!