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for Seasons of War

by Lomonaaeren

person polka dot
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Draco's not completely evil. So the buys can get smutty again~
person MewMew2
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job! The question to ask now is what has Nihl been up to in relation to Nusquam's situation during the course of this moral quandary?
schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how I missed that last chapter.

Ch5: Poor Harry and the moral dilemma. But now Arrowshot is useless to them and she will be killed...
person MewMew2
schedule July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Indeed. Thank you for updating this fic once more, excellent job!
person SP777
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #5...

1. Draco whispered,
person MewMew2
schedule July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I like that Harry is watching Draco preform his interrogation methods and not turning away in some sort of 'hero's moral dilemma' angst period. Please update once more when you have the chance!
person qwerty
schedule June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. Didn't see that one coming!
Great chapter! Eagerly awaiting the next!
person SP777
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #4...

Completely unexpected! To think you're on
the brink of something hot & heavy, then..
BAM!, Nusquam shows up to spoil the fun!

But, I'm sure our 'Slytherin Forever & Always'
will take care of the needs of his partner, before
taking care of the real business. ;-)

Hmm, a special connection between Nihil & his victims,
I don't know if I should call it a twist, but it definitely
gives the chapter an edge.

By the way, before I forget, when will you continue the
uhh...okay, I'm calling it 'the Fox & the Wolf' trilogy.
Because it's not listed in your Author's Profile last time
I looked. As a matter of fact, your profile is a little behind.
person polka dot
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Harry turns a blind eye to torture. Next he'll be taking photos with her while her eyes are bulging out. So sad.
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4: Oh my. Harry and Lopez didn't see the spit collide... Nice to see she sees it's not necromancy and explain it in a way it isn't.

Nice to see someone working with Draco that wont find any fault in him keeping things to himself and willing to let him keep things to himself. He may have found a good mentor.

She attacked now!? How did Draco find out how they just pop in when they want. I'm not clear on that.

Great chapter. Action... both kinds... and information!