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for Seasons of War

by Lomonaaeren

person polka dot
schedule July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
one good thing about dying, you're not the one who has to pack up all your stuff when you leave
Don't know why but this fic put that thought in my head
person SP777
schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #10...

Hellooo... :-)

1. Emotion is the same as motion...how so to you? Because I would have
simply explained it as a feeling that changes based on a situation or
surroundings.
schedule July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CH8: wow! What a fight! I loved it. Now, where did the blue come from. I find it interesting that once the snakes have done their job, they disappear? So Harry's fighting style of instinct seems to make it hard for Nihil to understand what Harry does. I liked how Nihil tried to seduce Harry to the darkside...

CH9: Sex! Nothing else needed to say. Well, besides thank you.

Ok, I want to know what Lopez found out! I do find it interesting how Lopez had categorized Harry's necromancy as it's own and not be upset about it... or is it the intent that Harry has that sets him apart from the others.
person polka dot
schedule July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't know about that. Cats can be pretty fierce. My 9 pounder put someone in the hospital when she was just a kitten. eheheh
person MewMew2
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job once more! Please update again when you have the chance.
person polka dot
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well that seems unfair. HArry gets a mini dragon, Draco gets whatever that silver dog thing is and Hermione doesnt get to keep her cat. Cats are the best!
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7: Oh, a partner for Ventus... I can't wait to see if he works out. I like how he's like her but the opposite.

Oh, Harry can't help but be cynical? And he's learned to spy a little better. Why didn't he use the connection to find Draco?

You stopped there?!? I'm on pins and needles now! Thank you. *smiles*
person polka dot
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Hermione's cat is around too. I hope not, Kitties should be kept out of mud fields and war.
person angelmuziq
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Man, looks like Draco became too cocky. I could never understand why characters would give away their plans to their captives because there is always the chance that they'll escape or something. LOL I hope that Harry can save him and that Draco doesnt get hurt or changed in any way. Great work. I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch6: Oh Gregory is turning out to be an ok ally... But it's good that Draco can see that the alliance with Gregory could end at a drop of a hat.

Interesting. Poor Harry has to be hurt to find out anything. Oh, so that weapon will be coming back... I wonder if Harry will get hurt ever single time it's used...

Harry is insightful when it comes to Draco. Good thing for Draco that Harry can get through to him.

Thanks for such a very interesting and revealing chapter.