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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aww they got so mushy; but I think they do need to trust some of the aurors with their discovery
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August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Harry is absolutely crazy to have tried that!!!! Even if what he did find out is useful. I can't wait for the next chapter so I can see what happens next!!!! Good job so far!! =)
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August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About #15....you know, as I read this I can't help BUT think this story is getting more complex and there doesn't seem to be a solution to be found. But I am curious to see what you come up with. Oh and by the way, that Herricks character is irritating.
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July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do think there' was nothing Draco could do with Holder and Robards but he may be getting in too far over his head. He's still a trainee.
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July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't think there's any good nicknames for ursala. It's such an old lady's name too. i have a hard time picturing Ventus as a young woman.
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July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch12: Holder should be in a world of pain... Since it's really/kind of Draco plotting and not Harry...
Herricks seems very protective of Ventus... Has he fallen for her already?
I'm glad Harry is standing his ground when it comes to "connecting" to Nihil. I'm totally against it.
Draco's look of constipation.... LMAO
Herricks seems very protective of Ventus... Has he fallen for her already?
I'm glad Harry is standing his ground when it comes to "connecting" to Nihil. I'm totally against it.
Draco's look of constipation.... LMAO
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July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About #12?.....I can see right now that Holder is your female version of Mad Moody. But a bit more twisted in the head, wouldn't be surprised if she had a trace of Nihil in her.
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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I hope Holder gets hurt...
Poor Harry having to do things the Slytherin (sp?) way... Helping but hiding it so people will use it.
I like that Herricks isn't as timid as he seemed. I hope the hard work that will go into making him part of the team will be worth it.
Poor Harry and all this magical theory.
Good chapter.
Poor Harry having to do things the Slytherin (sp?) way... Helping but hiding it so people will use it.
I like that Herricks isn't as timid as he seemed. I hope the hard work that will go into making him part of the team will be worth it.
Poor Harry and all this magical theory.
Good chapter.
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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Shape a piece of your mind so that it
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July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch10: Oh boy... First Harry, now Draco is jumping head first into things. Harry is rubbing off on him. I liked how Draco and Harry trusted each other to do their part, even if the trip wasn't planned. Interesting chapter.
So, sex is the answer.
I love that Lopez reminded Harry to spill his blood next time.
So, sex is the answer.
I love that Lopez reminded Harry to spill his blood next time.