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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It seems like this new group of Aurors is made up of mostly the same aurors as the last group which didn't work out. Then again I don't think Harry and Draco are fooling as many people as they think they are.
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August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Even if the attempts to try don't always work, the intent is there and, for now, that's enough. The group of aurors makes me think the Fellowship number 2 even if it's not and I'm curious to see the part that they will play in the rest of the story.
I also want to know what is going to happen with Hermione and the dreams she is having. I really feel bad for her and I hope something helps her soon.
Fabulous job and can't wait for the next chapter!! =)
I also want to know what is going to happen with Hermione and the dreams she is having. I really feel bad for her and I hope something helps her soon.
Fabulous job and can't wait for the next chapter!! =)
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August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Raverat is an interesting character. Also, I feel like there's something big behind Hermione's dreams but I can't put my finger on it. Hmmm.
Great chapter!
Great chapter!
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August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #17 [I think]...
Oookay, are they FINALLY making some type of progress and
moving forward or are they going to hash it out until the
cows come home, then up and die?
Also, why oh WHY do I get the feeling your going to have
Harry do some 'dastardly' deed that gets him into hot
water and gives Draco a slight heart attack in the near
future.
Oookay, are they FINALLY making some type of progress and
moving forward or are they going to hash it out until the
cows come home, then up and die?
Also, why oh WHY do I get the feeling your going to have
Harry do some 'dastardly' deed that gets him into hot
water and gives Draco a slight heart attack in the near
future.
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August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 18!!! What does Hermione's dreams mean? What could you build out of bones? An altar? A throne? But what kind of machine?
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August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #16...
Gotta admit, this chapter had something I like looking for in your stories, those
wonderful declarations of love.
Very few & far between now a'days...
I have to say they have a complex relationship, because if Draco is willing to give
up his life for Harry and Harry is willing to give up HIS life for Draco...well, DAMN!
Who will be alive to see the end? O_o
Just a thought...
Gotta admit, this chapter had something I like looking for in your stories, those
wonderful declarations of love.
Very few & far between now a'days...
I have to say they have a complex relationship, because if Draco is willing to give
up his life for Harry and Harry is willing to give up HIS life for Draco...well, DAMN!
Who will be alive to see the end? O_o
Just a thought...
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August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Gosh! What an intense couple of chapters! I hope Harry will be ok and not too perminantly changed from his latest ordeal. It wonderful how much Harry and Draco love each other. This war needs to be over so they can be safe and happy together. And that Holder woman needs to be gone- I hate her. lol. cant wait for the next chapter!
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I couldn't keep up and missed commenting on the last two... Great chapters.
Chap 13: Glad Draco's upbringing came in handy...
Chap 14: Poor Hermione, I hope she isn't being taken over, but that's what it looks like.
Chap 15: Harry has to do everything the hard way.
Interesting, so Herricks & Ventus seem to be hinted to having some really interesting personal time.. But that could just be them training together.
Chap 13: Glad Draco's upbringing came in handy...
Chap 14: Poor Hermione, I hope she isn't being taken over, but that's what it looks like.
Chap 15: Harry has to do everything the hard way.
Interesting, so Herricks & Ventus seem to be hinted to having some really interesting personal time.. But that could just be them training together.
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 17!!!
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. Finally having Harry at least agree to try and attempt to control the instincts that make him act without thougt to his own personal safety made me feel relieved. He's just too important to too many people for him to die on a whim. If he can keep that in mind then I believe that he will become less impulsive. That's my hope at least lol. I'm also curious t see how the new changes will affect Harry and if it will help in the overall war effort. Good job on this chapter!! =)