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June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice beginning here as a prologue, I can't wait for more! Really, there isn't enough Fenrir/Harry literature out there!
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June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!!!
Loved it! Headwig rocks!!!
Loved it! Headwig rocks!!!
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June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow! i'm not bugging you but i would really like it if you wrote more! thanks!~
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June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Harry groggily stood up and finally noticed he had an orgasm while sleeping." Since your using past tense the sentence should be "Harry groggily stood up and finally noticed that he'd had an orgasm while sleeping."
Otherwise, good start.
Otherwise, good start.