rate_review Reviews

And thank you so much for not character bashing. It's a trend that I absolutely loathe in fiction.

I am surprised that Harry sprouted a conscience there with Hermoine. I would have thought he would be all about getting what he wants. Then again this just give us more angst and suffering. And thats what we all want isnt it?!?

Well wasn't that mother fucking awesome.
The sex we've all been waiting for.
And its only going to get better from here. yay. :)
I'm so interested in this story its killing me, seriously.
I can't wait to read more.

Holy crap! I feel like there is something major about to happen with Harry and Hermione after all that build up!! Meeps!

Oh my! I never thought Narcissa would be Harry's cheat. Well that speaks volumes about he realtionship with Lucius doesnt it?

First off you're quite welcome and thanks muchly for the acknowledgement. The only downside is I don't have as much cool things to say in reviews without repeating myself. :-D

So I have to mention that the Weasley men have epic taste in comedy. Though speaking of British Comedy I'm just wondering how well 'Yes, Minister' would fit the operations of the ministry of magic. Remembering the fifth book its a pity the wizarding world aren't familiar with the Hackerism: "Don't believe anything until its been officially denied'

I really like the non-verbal communication going on between Ginny and Hermione through out the middle two scenes. And the irony in Ginny apparently thinking Hermione was no match for her looks wise.

I also liked that Ginny accompanied Harry to the brothels. It occurs to me it could have actually worked as a solution if she'd actually joined in, might have got Harry to treated her more as a co-domme than someone to be dominated.

Finally, Damn was that sex scene visceral. An excellent illustration of Harry's aggressive physicality. Though I kinda liked the description in the draft you sent me, with harry being smeared with juices over merely being coated.

P.S who dialed the difficulty of the CAPTCHA up to eleven? I better copy this in case it doesn't go through...

I LOVE this fic. Seriously. You write Hermione so well and I can actually imagine Harry growing up like this. And I love that the sex isn't like some bonus portion that's thrown somewhere in the story, it's weaved into the plot and everything flows so well. Really dark and intriguing, I cannot wait to see how everything resolves itself.

Really nice chapter. I really liked how Harry saw through Hermione's BS, when it was obvious to the reader that she was only really fooling herself. I can't wait to see how this story unfolds.

Wow. I'm literally speechless. I have so many mixed emotions about how this is playing out. I feel really bad for Ron, but I'm also very happy for Hermione. She needs this! And so does Harry. It's obvious that there's something mighty fierce between them that needs to be vetted out. The way Harry avoided her and then warned her only made the anticipation that much higher. the pacing is wonderful and it all feels a little too real. I love how animalistic he seems, but how much he was fighting it. They're both going to have some serious guilt to deal with. I'm dreading the fall out of this, but I want more of what happened towards the end! If this is the beginning, I can only imagine where he's going to take her. It seriously gives me chills and makes me giddy all at once. I'm definitely going to be re-reading this chapter a few more times before you post again.

This is an awesome story -- very complex and adult, and believable insofar as canon is concerned. Great job! Oh, and it's hot, too ;)