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That was a great chapter! I love your writing, it just has this beat to it and reading it is such a pleasure. I feel bad for Ron but at the same time I'm addicted to Harry and Hermione's chemistry in your fic. I can't wait to see how this turns out, how far down they're going to go, if they'll be able to stop before everything blows up in their faces.

amazing. one of the few authors who has a talent with words, the descriptive talent of reality with a creative dash. I cannot wait to read more. Once you are done with this appetizing story, if you would be interseted I have a challenge that is up regarding a harry/hermion rape scenario that I think only you would be able to capture emotionally and physically if you are interested. I look foward for what you think. Int he meantime i log on every day to see your updates. PS. Your ideas have made for great role play between me and my husband ;) thanks much.

Interesting I wonder why Harry was in such a state when he rang Hermione? More things going wrong with Ginny? OR just not having been in hermione's knickers for a few days? Pity Hermione was too lusted up to care.

And Hermione's so revved up she's jumping on Ron? That's going to be double the insult if he ever finds out. That awesome wife-sex you were having? Nah, that's just cause she's got the hots for your best fried.

Is Harry's wandless magic coming to become significant as the plot goes on?

Your writing is just crazy beautiful and the sex is hot Hot HOT.

"and my lower half seemed to light up like the grid of yellow bulbs over a fairground ride" LOVE THAT LINE. The visual is just spectacular. I simply love that image.

I really like this dark, dominant, sexy Harry. He

This is the number one 'can't wait for the next chapter' story in my check back list, you know. I love this story. Your style of writing is brilliant, engrossing, hot as hell! MORE!!

Amazing update. I loved their conversation, everyone is so in character, and when IC Harry lashes out at Hermione for making assumptions it gets me all bothered :) They are really playing a dangerous game here, and it seems to be escalating. I hate that Harry is leaving it all up to Hermione to figure out, like he's incapable of doing so, when we know he usually takes up the role of a leader. But it's also like him to rely on her when he doesn't *want* to figure it out. Great characterization there. I couldn't help but lol@ Ron's mispronunciation of telephone. I feel sorry for the guy, but you make it hard to sustain because the sex between Harry and Hermione is so hot! I think what I love most about this story is not only have complex and emotionally true everything rings but also how you've managed to maintain the UST and sexual chemistry even after a few encounters. You can feel the chemistry between these two, and even empathize with their cheating here. That's hard to do, so bravo. I'm looking forward to seeing if Hermione comes up with a solution or just says damn it all and rides Harry to hell. lol. I have to say also that this is definitely one of the hottest stories I've ever read, and the hottest Harry/Hermione by far, but that still doesn't stop me from being nervous about where this is headed. It doesn't matter though, I'm strapped in and ready to go wherever you take it to the end.

good story well writen, you not sure if hermoine loves harry, or this is just different, or how she feeling.

you get mad at her for not telling ron, what she wants, and how she feels. would be nice to see ron and hermoine in bed, to see the difference.

is the end going to be hermoein leave ron for harry. i hope not

I really love the characterisation of Hermione in this. The way she has brief flashes of sanity, where she wants to call things off but then lust overtakes her once more and she just dives right in...

The continued presence of Rose in the background of these scenes, is quite interesting. Sooner or later you'd think one of these fuck sessions is going to get interrupted by her. It'd be interesting to see Harry and Hermione's reactions to that.

Her priorities are good as well; spanking is a no-no, being eaten out into a delirium is A-OK.

WOW!!! I am so sorry to have been away from this story for so long, but at the same time, happy to have such scrumptious goodies to whirl my mind. Goodness, Salon-Kitty, your writing is astounding. The detail with which you portray your characters emotions and thought processes put the reader right into their heads. I love it! Harry is so deliciously.... insatiable... Yum! Hermione is just spot on. Her sinking depression and boring self-image, her inability to cope with failure, even the way she tries to justify and reason her obsession with Harry. This is exactly how I could see things playing out within the trio years after the war. Even Ginny is perfectly done, with her self-assured grace and easy elegance. When she dismissed Hermione so nonchalantly...that is a feeling every girl can associate with. We have all been in that exact situation before. And I am so happy with the way you progressed into their heated affair, it is so realistic. Harry and Hermione are caring and weary people, who would not jump blindly into a devastating relationship that was sure to destroy their already cracking lives. But to slip and slide into it as they have, and be trapped by the heated sticky mess that their unadulterated exultation reveals...Awe! You have done a beautiful thing. I just love it and I cannot wait for more. That scene in the drawing room was just...beyond words... At least not any that I can convey that would do your's justice.

Waiting eagerly for more! :)

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