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great chapter, very hot, hermone wanting to please harry more then any one else. that intresting it does not have to be love becouse there are those you want to make proud of that your dont love. she putting her family in danger but you want to be control by harry. he dangerous he might go to far.

would hermoinie subment to ron if he tried to take control.

intresting ride a good one but intresting all the same.

i email you:). Great chapter! had the sex, drama,guilt, suspense,love, and passion all wrapped up in one. I was getting a little tired of re-reading the same thing allt he time. lol. Sorry your work makes for easy work ups for me. I don't know how anyone would not be able to read that and not get hot tot heir core!. will wait for the next chapter, and i hope it does not take as long as this one did. as for life, oh i know how that feels, and is, and yes u are allowed to have a block. Just wanted to say i missed you:)

From the start of this chapter, you had me squirming. I LOVE your Harry! He's a bastard! But he's still very much Harry, just a much more jaded and Slytherin version, and what makes him so fab is that he's conflicted about it but still does what he wants. SEXY MOTHERF&*$%! Hermione cracks me up with her own inner conflict. I'm glad she told Harry all of that, and his reaction was so Harry. lol I was afraid he was going to retreat into himself and withdraw for good, so I'm glad he came back. That confrontation they had was HOT :) And now the drama starts. This is going to be so freakin' uncomfortable for everyone. I almost want everything to come out, shoot the horse and put it out of its misery! Looking forward to seeing how this meeting goes down. Great writing, as always.

I'm getting caught up on this story (just finished chapter 5) and I read each chapter with bated breath. I'm a huge fan of Harry and Hermione's friendship, but never really like them romantically. It's so believable here. But you've made it work while at the same time making their connections to their respective spouses seem real. I've suffered from depression and I can totally empathize with so many of Hermione's dark thoughts. I am so addicted to this story, but I feel like I'm watching a car crash waiting to happen. Harry and Hermione are getting closer and closer and, since this is AFF, I'm willing to bet we'll get some more smut soon. However, I fear this will not end well for our heroes. And while I adore Hermione and Harry and feel for what they're both going through, I worry for Gin and Ron. When this hits the fan, they're going to be the ones played for the fools. I'm going to keep reading and I'll probably get mad when I reach the last chapter, so be sure to update soon! (Unless you're working on Girls & Boys, in which case, you're forgiven!)

It freaks me right out when Hermione makes a comment like "well child then" letting me know that soon she will have 2 children with her husband and this all happened in the past. I get goosebumps.

When Im reading Harry and Hermione together I keep wondering what it was like with Harry and Ginny. At what point did she balk? How is Hermione so much different to be turning him on so? My wicked mind will not rest.

OUuuuu I really liked their chat about body jewlery! I want Hermione to be picerced but have no idea how she could explain that to Ron. Oh their rendezvous would be some much eaiser if they had a time turner! Make it so!

ZOMG I was so happy when I popped back to AFF to see this story has been updated. I swear its on my top 10 stories of all time and I dont even ship HG/HP. Thats how bad you have hooked me! Woot!

I am impressed that Ginny went with Harry to the whore houses. I dont know if I would have been that strong in her shoes. Hermione talking to her about it made my skin crawl. I wanted to shake Hermione and tell her to get the hell out of there!!

Your Harry all dominate and powerful is really hot. I hope he keeps pushing Hermione around. Seems like she needs it.

I am so glad that their meeting to "resolve" their affair went to hell in a handbasket. I much prefer them naked and being naughty!

FRantastic story, I'd some more from you.

Excellent writing, as always. And so hot! what really makes this hot is the way you're delving into the psychological aspect of how this came about for both Harry and Hermione, and how it's impacting Hermione at the moment and in retrospect. I love how heady and deep their sexual conversations get. I can totally see both of them probing each other in such a way, trying to understand and at the same time lose themselves in this desire. The image of Harry smoking pot and listening to trippy music while testing his Gryffndor tie for durability is kinda hot. lol. And I love love love that Hermione made a definitive decision to keep seeing Harry and demanded to see more of him! lol. She knows what she wants, now it's a matter of how to do it, and reconcile it with her marriage. That's going to be hard. Still worried about the fallout, but as always looking forward to the ride.