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Wow, That was one helluva in-betweener!

That was an awesome update. Ron's last words during the dinner scene were hilarious. I think Hermione wasn't the only one guilty of romantisizing her situation with Harry because when he set her straight about the true nature of their relationship, I realized I was romantisizing it as well. I guess he had to straighten us both out. Lol. I absolutely live how the drama is unfolding.

Wow, this is getting even more intense. Harry and Hermione are fucked, really. If you're really staying true to the essence of these characters from the books, then once they get over this "honeymoon" period of their affair, they'll get a cold dose of reality and feel like shit - and I know Hermione's getting these bouts of guilt but really, she's still letting her lust for Harry cloud right over that. Both of them, despite what has been said, obviously haven't TRULY grappled with the fact that they are indeed having an affair. They are cheating on their spouses, one of whom is their mutual best friend, and the other of whom is just as close to all of them! Arghh. There is a shit storm brewing, for certain, but I have no idea how it's all going to go down.

I really can't wait to see where you take this. You've got me hooked, albiet reluctantly. Please update soon.

This is so great. I knew from the first sentence that this story would be quality. Great job.

(WrittinInStone)

Okay, chapter nine is great. Like... a lot. =]

Harry seems a bit... unbalanced? Lol.

I wonder how Hermione is going to react when Harry really does something that pushes her too far. Will she stand up to him?

Also, they are perfect for each other. They're both quite... uh.. kinky. =]

I read Brandon's review and I have to say it was amusing, but I agree.

I don't think it's really hit Hermione and Harry yet exactly how much they're risking by carrying on this affair. It almost seems like a game to them. It's like the risk itself is what's making it more attractive.

Not only that, Teddy seeing them is bad. I wonder if Harry is going to do a memory charm on him. That would be... bad, but something I would expect this Harry to do. He doesn't seem as good as usual, more like Dark!Harry. Way dark...

But like Brandon said, you've got me hooked. I can't wait to see where the story goes.

I thought WesleyY7's review was right on the money. The short-term pleasure that comes with infidelity may seem like it's worth it, but... it is going to tear their families apart.

Did Hermione weigh losing her husband and the respect of her husband's family when she engaged in this affair? Did Harry consider the possibility of only being able to see his kids every other weekend if they find out (which they will).

It's never worth it, then again, saying that and resisting that delicious bowl of ice cream that's sitting in front of you ready to be devoured is a different thing (Harry is the ice cream to Hermione, by the way.)

Still, Hermione seems to not think too highly of Ron, and Harry IS a bastard. Like... a serious one.

(You may be wondering why I'm reviewing so much, it's simply because I decided to do a bit extra for the people who don't =] This story, despite its difficult themes, or perhaps I should say BECAUSE of its difficult themes, deserve more reviews. Plus, I promised. =])

This is really great. Please update soon.

Gosh, I am so in love with this story.

Part of me wants Ron to find out what the hell is going on, but the other part is wishing he never does because of the horrible fall-out that will ensue. The Weasley's have played an integral role in shaping Harry into a human being that is capable of loving. I truly believe they were the one factor that kept Harry from turning down the dark path that claimed Tom Riddle. So to know that he is betraying them, betraying Ron, in the most horrible way imaginable, I just can't even fathom it.

great chapter, but is she pregnant?

Now that's a decent cliffhanger. Ron calling an intervention has a lot of promise. Especially if Harry mistake's the reason why Ron wants to have a serious chat with him...

Harry on the other hand, is being a total dick. Taking advantage of your friend's submissive tendencies to 'win' an argument is not going to solve anything at all.