rate_review Reviews

So before I go any further, I just have to say how in character everyone feels. It's so good, I'd never really thought about these two having this sort of relationship but it makes total sense. Can't wait to read the rest!

Wow. I don't even know what to say. I'm not sure if I reviewed this before but since I'm re-rereading, it deserves another anyway. The characters are so beautifully spot on. I can't believe it. It's so truly an extension of the characters in the books and the rest is developed in such a brilliant way. Well done to you! And also, the smut it great, I won't deny it.

OMG!!!!!!!!!!! i am completely obsessed over this story.... i read it all in one go, you definitely have a gift to make it all seem REAL! my goodness, you definitely have inspired me in the bedroom hehe very grateful i found this story!!! 10 stars if possible, dont ever stop writing :DD

I rather wish this wasn't abandoned. And that the affair was uncovered. By Rita Skeeter. Now that would have been positively hilarious. And disastrous for Hermione. I always like when smutfics like this involve a bit of plot into them, and the degradation and humiliation of both Harry and Hermione by everyone who knows them would have been fantastic to read about. Because let's face it, they're fucked in the head, that's all there is to it. It would have been a neat twist to have Hermione's and Harry's children taken away by their spouses.

please update this fic.and please don't put Hermione in narcissa's category in Harry's life.harry must respect and love and care for her more than fuck.and Hermione can't be that guiltless.please with all the wonderful fucking write a few moments where HarryHermione still care for eachother deeply.and that Hermione still have a little selfrespect left

I have fallen into this story. Your character development is beyond impressive as is your Harry. I think that out of all your amazing fics this story really shows your potential as a writer. I'm very curious to see where you are going with this. I know you're not getting paid to write this so no pressure on updating but it would be a shame to not finish it, is all i'm gonna say ;) I could go on forever about all the things I love about your story but I'll just leave it like this.
Hope all is well and thanks for writing this.

Veeeery interesting. I can see that you've decided to abandon this fic but I hope that hasn't meant you've chosen to abandon writing. You really do have quite a talent for it. Your voice is fresh and casual while also being penetrating. I found myself almost able to predict what you were about to say, and not in a bad way. My thought process rolled along with this story fabulously. I'm not sureh ow else to explain it.
Anyway, keep writing. Even if it's not fanfic. Just keep writing.
xx
Desdemona

I hope someday soon, I'll come on here and find that this story has finally been updated. We've been on Chapter 9 for a long time now ... please ... soon.

That was hot.

Been brushing up on the archives these last few days and I have to say, out of the 50+ stories I've browsed/read, this is by far one of the best.

Wish fulfillment and sexy crack is fun/ny, but this is a nice, meaty, organic development from the characters at the end of the series to where you've taken them. It's endlessly fulfilling to be able to read about "real" characters that aren't just placeholders for sexy times. (Nothing wrong with mindless smut)

I don't have much to say that hasn't been said by others. Voices and characterization are actually spot on (compared to most of the other stories I've read), and the highest compliment I can pay to you is that this really does feel like it could have been a natural progression from the end of the books. It actually feels like we're learning more about the trio, and that they're developing and becoming more complex which is incredibly satisfying. I don't know how much time you've spent planning and reflecting on how their history has impacted who they are (and what they do), but it shows and it works.

It's dirty, wrong, and instantly arousing. Thanks for giving pleasure to the mind and the more... raunchy side of things.

This is so well written that I actually feel like a pervert for reading it. Their characterisations are so spot-on that it's almost awe inspiring. I can only say that I eagerly look forward to reading more. I mean really... the build up to the sex as been fantastic. The NC-17 rated moments are even better. The fact they've actually got serious real life issues had me reading this fic beginning to the current chapter without stopping.

The only problem is, I can just see the angst coming on...it's making me nervous, considering that I do like to see H/Hr together.