rate_review Reviews

I cannot begin to express how much I love this so far. More please?

Wow, I love this story. Your writing is so great, and I was shocked to see how low the rating was! This story definitely deserves better than +++. I love how your characters are very 3 dimensional and I like the fact that they have their very real flaws and problems. It makes your story very accessible, even to those of us who haven't necessarily had experience with the types of problems presented in your story. I do hope to read more of your story soon! Excellent work!

Firstly, let me say thank you. Thank you for not bashing Ron and making Ginny a total bitch. That happens so often in fanfic, and I love that you've managed to create this tale that will eventually become H/Hr without demonizing their spouses.

The first two chapters have been fascinating and surprising. This is definitely not a long PWP you often find on this site, but what I feel will be an emotional ride I will be happy to go on. (A ride with sex, I'm sure.) ;)

I like ron, and i belive that with a few changes he could have been a great person, i think he still a great person.


i hate authors that to get hermoine with either harry or draco, they have ron turn in a wife beater, or cheater. then hermone fall in love with harry or draco in like five second, and then the o my god they are so great in been, that get old fast


So thank you for the promise of know ron bashing,

ps richard3542000@yahoo.com if want to talk,

Wow. I definitely didn't see that coming. Or 'her', should I say? I suppose even Malfoys deserve personal pronouns. *smirk*

Also... Hermione owns a g-string? My word. I'm stunned, and oddly turned on by that. Excellent chapter: strong development, well-maintained voice, some great twists and turns. You're obviously setting up for an emotionally hard-hitting story - as you're not taking the easy way out of making Ron and Ginny unlikeable. So the net effect is that this is going to get very painful, in more ways than one, but I admire a story with narrative integrity.

Keep it up!

loving it continue

Ah! Bravo! This story is so REAL. I love it! You do such a wonderful job of describing the process of deteriorating relationships, and Hermione's unintentional attraction to Harry is poignant and so feasible. I love what you have done with Harry. He has always seemed like such a dominant personality. The boy has such a wild temper, he's got to be a bit aggressive in the bedroom. But I must say, his plastic antics with Mrs. Malfoy completely blind-sided me. Wonderful! I love being blind-sided. I know how you feel about that ferret, so I completely busted out laughing when I read your description of Harry fucking his mother's brains out. Nice!

I really enjoyed the scene with Hermione and Ron. You did an incredible job of revealing Hermione's views of her husband, both sexually and his physical appearance. At the same time, your description of her ongoing thoughts of Harry as they shagged was brilliant. And again, so realistic. The fact that she was so guilty the next morning also provided the view that Hermione is not a vindictive person. She cannot help these feelings and urges, and I like how she constantly tries to justify them. That is something we all tend to do. Her painstaking wait for Harry's phone call was a scene everyone can relate to, as well. We have all been there before. Although it wasn't Harry Potter's call we were waiting on. Damn, I wish. Just your description of his intense gaze got me all excited!

I cannot wait to read more, and I absolutely love this story. Your writing style is so comfortable and steady, I get to the end wishing there was more!

Wow! Now that was interesting some nice Hermione stuff and at the end, really quite shocking. I'd really never expected to see Narcissa Malfoy making an appearance here. From the blue eyes, blonde hair bit I'd been expecting it to be Luna. Harry's into MILFs now? :D

Looking forward to seeing how this turns out.

What a well written story! The entire premise is believable, interesting, and downright entertaining...Hermione's crisis with her family and life are extremely detailed and easy to relate to, even if one has not gone through such an experience. I like that there is room to explain exactly what is going on, as well as hwo the story is written, that it can go either way from here. Everyone's personalities are suitable and in-line with canon, and I can't wait for the next chapter in this gem.

Awsome new story. I can honestly say I never would have guessed harry was getting it on with Narciss. ANyway it is well written as all of your stories are. Also its a breath of fresh air to read a well written fic that dosen't bash the characters especially the Weasly's.
My only question to you is this soley going to be Harry/Hermione or will Harry be with multiple women?
Thanks
Pete