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aaaaargh!! so brilliant!!! This story is fantastic - I can't wait for more. When I saw a new chapter up i was already rejoicing even before I opened it. And it was even better than I hoped.

good story, ginny tired and with all she said she really tried.

Except, perhaps, someone like Ron. Ron, who had coveted a woman like Fleur, who felt that a beauty like that would give him an instant credibility, that men would admire and be jealous of him, a desire that he held buried in his heart. But also a man who

WOah that was a very nice chapter. The build up to the was very tense and I half expected Hermione to tell him to back off. Can't wait for the next one.

OMG! This totally exceeded my expectations of their first time. First, I absolutely love the psychological exploration of Harry (and Hermione) here. I love how Hermione tries to keep a distance by acting all analytical but you know she's trying to keep a distance because of her own desires. I love how Harry pushes back and shocks her, and I love how this deepens her interest in him as something more than just the Harry she thinks she knows. Everything he said rang true to his character and experiences. And I've never seen a breast milk sex scene, so I was a little skiddish when I got a whiff that was where you were going, but oh my goodness, that was HOT as hell. Even more hot because it totally took Hermione by surprise too. I love how easily Harry slipped into his Dom role, and how natural it fit him. Hermione's surprise and arousal by it was so believable, and then when he came back for more? *dead* I love this! Such an awesome update.

Woah! That was last scene was intense. Harry really does get into the mother's milk thing. Would be too clich

Wow, chapter four. It seems insufficient to say that it was awesome. It blew my socks off. The build up of sexual tension, the curiousity of forbidden fruit, nursing your child on one breast while having the other breast treated in a very different fashion. The descriptive terms used were fantastic. I have two kids so I can vouch for colic, feeling like a cow, and ppd.

loving this.

This was an awsome chapter. I can't wait to see whats next. It would also be interesting to see a lemon where Harry is with Narcissa. Anyway hope to see the other fics updated too.

Hmm. Inviting Harry to your house, all alone and making him unleash? Can see where this is going :P

Really nice chapter, Hermione's analytical side really comes out in the chapter, at times she almost seems like a professional psychiatrist with the way she poses her quesstions. I really liked Harry blind-siding her and trying to talk about her problems. Even if she quickly deflected him.

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I'm really glad you had Harry affirm Hermione as a woman in this chapter. And it didn't seem false, he really appreciates her in many ways. She really needed to hear that. And I love how, even though this is written from Hermione's point of view, you're getting deep into both of their psyches. It's reminding and re-establishing just how complex and tight their emotional bond is. It's a great build up and tease for what's to come, and lord knows I can't even imagine now, not after Harry's confession of his possessiveness of Ginny. That was so hot, I hope he gets addicted to Hermione in the same way, but the real question is, just how far/dark can he go. The fact that he's slightly scared of that question himself is kinda scary. I love their conversation, so natural and in character for both of them. And I love how you're treating secondary characters and how Hermione thinks and acts towards them. It really feels like her and that's so rare and refreshing. I had to lol@Hermione trying to find out about Harry's sex life in order to "help him". lol. She's really shoveling it now. I'm glad Harry called her out on it. You show so many sides of him just in conversation, it's like foreplay. :D Can't wait to see where you're going with this. Great update!