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November 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful bit of naughty fantasy.
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January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was really good!!! Congratulations =]
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November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very cheeky! I loved it.
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Me likey. Hot and smutty. Perfect end to my day. Insert me in Hermione's place and it really is perfect.
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July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I could not stop reading. In fact, I had to read it aloud to a friend and once more for my own pleasure. Your description was vivid and delicious. I could smell Severus's presence as if I were Hermione. You did a brilliant job and should definitely keep doing what you're doing!
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June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a cool story.
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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha you had me going! Great story! Loved all of it
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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. I always like a little voyerism/exhibitionism too... LOL. You should think about writing a multi-chapter story with HGSS. I think you are very creative.
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June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What I liked:
1) very hot PWP. Good flow, stayed with you all the way, and you didn't lose my interest.
2) The twist was cute; expected (since you stuck it in the AR section) but cute.
What I didn't like:
This is a problem for me with most PWPs. I can rename the characters, and I get the same effect. I can make all the characters OCs, it doesn't matter. It's why I usually shy away from PWPs. Because I like a little substance. Yours being longer, I took a chance.
I'm not saying he wasn't Severus Snape - he very much was. But he could also be Lucius Malfoy, Draco Malfoy, Dark!Harry, Dark!Ron (although the bit about the eyes would be harder with Harry or Ron)
Overall, I really did like it - a sexy little piece I'll probably revisit in the future when I need quick stress relief.
1) very hot PWP. Good flow, stayed with you all the way, and you didn't lose my interest.
2) The twist was cute; expected (since you stuck it in the AR section) but cute.
What I didn't like:
This is a problem for me with most PWPs. I can rename the characters, and I get the same effect. I can make all the characters OCs, it doesn't matter. It's why I usually shy away from PWPs. Because I like a little substance. Yours being longer, I took a chance.
I'm not saying he wasn't Severus Snape - he very much was. But he could also be Lucius Malfoy, Draco Malfoy, Dark!Harry, Dark!Ron (although the bit about the eyes would be harder with Harry or Ron)
Overall, I really did like it - a sexy little piece I'll probably revisit in the future when I need quick stress relief.