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by Lomonaaeren

schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 3!!! At least they're trying!
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is gettin good update soon please
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2
Hmm.. everything seems to be going fine between them now that they have an understanding - at least for the pushing-for-information part. I wonder what tactic Snape's going to use now to retrieve his old potion book now that the subject of Harry's childhood environment is off limits. That is, if he still wants to control what dangerous spells Harry will learn "just in case"... but it's not like getting the book back from Harry will make things simpler or better for either of them. At least, Snape knows what Harry is learning from the book. On the other hand, getting it back would cut off the only knowledge of what his son will be learning behind his back.

I love Draco's opportunistic personality, and I like the conflicting relationship between Snape and Harry so far, please don't stop ~ !
person Kibou32
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey.

Does this mean this is the end of both Volatile and Practicing Liars? 'Cause I would've liked a more united - but certainly not fluffy - relations of father-son between them. And what the hell is Draco doing?!
person SP777
schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #2...

I was wondering how you were going to wind this
up, considering chapter one was like a...heavy
loaded question that needed a deep answer.

I wouldn't be surprised if you wind up re-naming
this, 'Volatile-the 10 part Epilogue'. :-)

But, I get the feeling you got it where you want it.
person js
schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
would love it if u continue
once of my favourite storues so would like to see more sequels...
person kate
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please don't make it into a two shot only because i think that there is so much problem that they need to deal w/.
person kate
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i understand harry's point of view. just because he's the father doesn't mean that harry should trust him. he hasn't been fair in the beginning. he has been so horrible that i wanted to punch him so badly just because he thought harry was james son. just because snape is sorry doesn't mean that all is forgiven just like that. he didn't forgive james, surius or remus. why should he be forgiven? i really think that snape should learn from his mistake. he needs to learn a little humility. he should understand how hurt harry has been by his own family and that it's hard for him to trust an adult, especially family. if i were harry i would have done the same thing as him. i would try to minimize my interaction w/ him. it's so easy for everyone to forget what snape has done to harry in the past, remember when he needed (really needed) to learn occlumency. also imagine being verbally abused daily, imagine being provoked but not being able to do anything about it because you can be expelled from the only place you call home.
person paigeey07
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it!
person SP777
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man, talk about stub-born! *rolls eyes*

On the one hand, Severus is right. Harry won't
be able to learn the theory or problem solving
properly, if he depends too much on that book.
Though he could have asked in a different/Slytherin
way.

On the other hand, Severus was wrong for even trying
to get HArry to talk about his childhood, when he knows
how the boy feels.

He should have waited until talking about past lives
would have been comfortable in the foreseen future,
regardless of the subject.