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for Water from a Stone

by Lomonaaeren

schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:D lol love the story so far! <3
person polka dot
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hahaha teachers in the wizarding world must be paid a whole lot better than teachers in the real world. I think they spend more on the books for the class than the teacher who teaches from them
person SP777
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #3...

WHAT!!! You mean to tell me you're going to
have Draco learn the Patronus spell in this
story? But, you won't do it in the 'Running
to Paradise'...Running somewhere to Paradise'
trilogy???

Come on now! :-P

Anyway, like this laid back approach or I should
feeling that this story has. Plus, the fact it
feels like Harry is at his wits end AND about to
pull his hair out! It has a subtle humorous feel
to it that I KNOW you didn't realize you were doing.

Sometimes, the best humor is when it comes through
naturally.
person layne378
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, cant wait for the next chapter.
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 4!!! Neither boy has realized that the other has no idea what they're talking about. Draco is taking everything personally. Harry just thinks Draco is loony!
person Sarah
schedule June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great Start! Cant wait to see where this goes :)
person TCardan
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great start and an interesting plot. Looking forward to reading more from you.
person Elypsis
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it's an interesting start for a story and i can't wait for the next chapter.
poor harry makes a 'mistake', gets no sleep and no one understands him...

keep writing so i can keep reading..! :D
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2.

Ah I see. Poor Harry, not getting any sleep... what are those students doing in the corridors in the middle of the night? Especially Slytherins seeing how persecuted they are, even by prefects. I laughed when I read Harry's frustrated and tired "Go to sleep!" XD

Won't anyone help Harry in this task? Fighting Voldemort was worse, so why can't Ron and Herm - ok at least Hermione - be by his side in this? And everyone else - the teachers, other friend of Harry's, the Slytherins - aren't very helpful either. Ugh it's frustrating!
person SP777
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #2...

Okay, despite a few seriousness in here, some of
the crap Harry had to endure was QUITE funny!
Poh' Harry....Poh'..Poh' Harry! :-)

Oh, I don't know about you, but if it was me, and
I EVER found out that it was Terry who hit me in MY
face!!!???!!! Awww hell, there wouldn't be a
story I would be kicking ass all around and taking
names.

By the way, what do you do for a living? Work in an
office, if I may be inquisitive {yes, it means noisy}
So hush... :-p