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by hustlerose

schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have been remiss in not reviewing; for that, I apologize.

I must admit, I am glad that you did not post another chapter of pure smut. While I like the sex, I would also like some plot.

I like your Draco. And you've got hints again in ch6 that make me go back to the line in ch1 that caught my eye to begin with. I'll be waiting patiently for that thread to develop.

So far, I am thoroughly enjoying your story. I have to wonder, though, when Hermione's going to try to bite back again?
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the new chapter! HOT...HOT...HOT!!!!!

More, more and more.
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey there. I got to finally catch up on this story. What an interesting relationship they have. Heat and hate. I am glad the sex is so good she can overlook his use of the M word over and over again. But, yeah, the sex is explosive... Thanks! HG4eva
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the sexiest and hottest story ive ever read! I love it that Draco was so dominant and hermione is submissive. Im sure Draco in the end would slowly realized that what they have is more than just sex. great writing!
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I await more. Don't leave us hanging!
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You, my dear, are the proud owner of a number 5.
(http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=4998&st=60&p=205095&#entry205095)
And I read it twice, so you actually own two. I didn't read it today - I read it yesterday. (When you read the above post you'll understand why you're just getting this now.)
person MDH's pet
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please!!! Tell me that there will be more.

I just love when Draco tortures Hermoine.
person MDH's pet
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOT...HOT...HOT!!!!

I just could not get enough.

I certainly hope there will be MORE!?!?!?!?
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I didn't find any typos. Thanks for a very entertaining little story!
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Chapter 4 was worth the wait!