rate_review Reviews

Great job!
I must admit you got my attention from the begining. Since I've read the first chapter I've tried to figure out what would come next, but what you have chosen seems perfect. I like the way you portray them, the fine detailes that you capture. It's been a great pleasure to read this so far, I can only hope to get another chapter soon!

Interesting, very interesting You have my full attention now. Please continue this fic when you have the chance, I'm excited to see where this goes......

I can't wait to see what Sirius is going to do to find out Remus' secret.

Please tell me that Sirius will put that bitch Janine in her place!!
Can't wait for the next chapter! This is really good so far!

Please write more!

good start! I like it! is it gonna be a multi-chaptered fic? I hope so!
Cheers,
Danii.

Great story so far. Hope that you post more soon!

Ok so I really like where this is going, and I like the writing- but why are they so young? xD. It sounds like you're working them from like... an American high school POV, where Remus is at least 13 or 14. but at hogwarts, in his first year, he'd be 11... and yeah, this sounds like it's gonna get pretty hot, I wish they were older lol.

And also just as a quick ref, James Potter was a chaser... I don't know if you care or not, but just wanted to point that out.

Anyway, I feel really bad now because I do LIKE this story, and I hope you continue it because it's going to be on my 'must-watch' list, I hope I haven't discouraged or angered you or anything.

Great Start to a nice plot!! Please continue.. I'm waiting for some 'good' parts.. If you know what i mean.. :p

Okay, you've got me hooked. Hopefully Sirius wont be fucking his brain out in first year XD Looking forward to next chapter!