rate_review Reviews

Hey.. Great Chapter, you really left me at edge with that cliffhanger.. I want more!!!!!

I really love it so far! I look forward to reading more!

good start, looking forward to watching where you take this. a few issues with randomly switching between characters' POV that's made a few parts kind of confusing, but all in all, pretty good

I just finished reading the cliffhanger at chapter 3 and you have no idea how bloody SAD I was that there currently was no chapter 4... I kept on clicking the spot where "next chapter" usually is, hoping I could change reality and read the rest of the story...

Long story short, update please? -puppy eyes-

wow, he caught on fast....

Lol, Sirius is sharp when he pays attention, isn't he?
I look forward to reading more.

I loved the chapter... It was very well written and I can't wait for more... I hope it will be a little sooner *wink*wink*

You have to write more. Please! This is goinng great but I thought you had abondoned it. I'm glad you haven't.

I like this story. I like where the plot seems to be going. I definitely like the idea of it, but the pacing is so incredibly quick and there is a serious lack of detail. The pacing is really throwing me off in this story because of that. It's heavy on dialog, but we only get tiny glimpses into the characters' minds and what action seems to be occurring. Their ages threw me off a little too in relation to their years in school, but the given explanations seem to be working well enough. It's an interesting premise, and I certainly like the idea of Remus being Sirius' property. That adds a neat twist to the story itself.

I love the first two chapters and can't wait for more

Hope you update soon