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for Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

by Daye

person Rahhel
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I was hoping for such an "I love you" twist. Though I was thinking that they would first talk how their relationship seems to be mostly physical first.

Hope to see the latter addressed as well.
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
Continuuuuue,
Z.
person ares88
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Liked it generally. Nice lenght even if the sex lacks 'heat'. i dont know... perhaps their relationship is too... common. I dont know. im not sure about the teacher idea. It can turn very well or very bad. well see. on another note, i dont understand why they dont take advantage of Tonks abilities when having sex? i know its romantic when he wishes to have only her but i think they should try to be 'advanterous'. anyway waiting your update soon.
person Bob
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter, keep it up.
person Hmm
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
get with the kinky sex already.
person GeminiSoul
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see a new chapter of this. Poor Harry, he thinks he's found love and is feeling
a bit rejected. Poor boy. I almost feel sorry for him.
person Owned6
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Its a great story. i loved this chapter and i cant wait for you to update.

I personally like how even though they are married now there is a lot of problems to deal with unlike some of the other story's with the same basic plot line.
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, as usual, the sex scene was warm and delicious. I was not surprised that Harry thinks he's fallen for Tonks, but her tough talk was heartbreaking to hear knowing how Harry would respond to such a denial. I can just imagine the turmoil, poor kid.

I love the little flashes you give us of Harry being a bit more mature than Tonks on occasion; their banter is a lot of fun (when she's not stomping on his heart). I always forget about the curse on DADA. I'm dead curious what you have planned for Professor Tonks now.

Hope the two of them can arrive to some kind of happy medium. I mean, as Tonks pointed out--they're married. Why not just let the poor guy be in love with her? Enjoyable chapter, Daye.
person marshall88
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great story its my favorite one to read on this site at this time. great writing and plot hope to read more soon
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Tonks seems to have a tendency to put her foot in her mouth around Harry. But her objection does make sense: how can Harry be sure that it is love that he feels? He never had any example of it growing up. I do buy him truly loving her, but I also buy her doubts about it. Should be interesting to see what happens next with the unlikely couple.

Just out of curiosity: how long are you planning to go with this story? Through the end of 6th year? 7th year? Or have you not really decided yet?