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Somehow, I get the sense that somewhere in the back of Tonks' mind is this idea that once Harry defeats Voldemort she'll be free of this 'marriage' and that she can go on with her life as it was before. Because otherwise, if she considered this union even remotely a lifetime thing, she would be a little more pragmatic about the whole venture. Instead, she treats Harry like he's a temperamental, hormonal child and then uses him for sexual gratification, deluding herself into believing it's the proper way to placate him. Harry has intense feelings for her, and while its true that much of that is partly due to his youth, partly due to the fact that he's not had that kind of intimacy and affection before, I still can't help but think he's the more mature of the two and that what he's feeling is very real for him. At least he's honest with her in a way that doesn't tear her to shreds.

Very curious to see how Harry's going to feel the next day.

Ridiculously good writing, as good as Rowling herself! Only complaint: needs more chapters and more frequent updates! I've been brought into the story so much I'd hate to see something that is becoming enthralling end. ~ Baby D

I love this story and am glad to see that you're continuing it. Well written, everyone seems in character, it's great.

really good, and ron does have some points, harry has a lot to deal wtih but he does get a lot. and it would be hard to be ron to have the girl you love, always want to talk about your best friend,

Great story, I like how its developing to be more about an actual relationship and somewhat realistic towards how poor harry would be developing. Lets face it poor harry got screwed by everyone in the books. Here he has some actual support and a goal to drive for.

Good job on this fic. So far more believable, and more realistic than most other Honks marry fics. Continue onward!

Quite like the story. Too bad it took so long for the this chapter to come out. The awkwardness between Tonks and Harry is really good. Also the part about having a bad night being away from each other after weeks of being sort of a couple.

I'm curious to see what kind of teacher Tonks will be with Harry. Extremely demanding, favouring him or just teaching him like any of the others.

The Ron/Hermione scene was really good and funny, since all she seemed to have heard is the part about him not having courage to ask someone out. Would have liked having Ron saying that with all the really bad things that happened to Harry he gets something really good in return, so that his life is rather balanced like the other, just a bit more extreme. Well, that might have been a bit too grown up for Ron to say right now.

Either way, I hope to see the next chapter soon. Hopefully a bit of smut. Doesn't have to be outright sex. Harry and Tonks don't seem to take the time to enjoy their sexuality. It seems rather fast and getting directly to the main part.

Aaar, marital bliss :D

You are quite a good writer, and your chapter length is decent. You also give some good effort into what is going on in your character heads, unlike many Fanfic writers.

So, in all, keep it fucking up! :D

I must admit, at first I was dubious about reading the story, BUT I am really starting to like it. there are some mistakes like added letters to words that I saw in a few chapters, and I burst out laughing at Molly asking Tonks how Harry was in bed. I will certainly be keeping a look out for new chapters (or just give me a poke on the forum as I'm rather bad at keeping up)

Anyway, all in all, I am liking it, and hope you keep up with it

Excellent chapter Im glad u updated this one. Will Harry still be getting lessons with Dumbledore? Will there be horcruxes? I hope to see another update on this fic.