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August 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
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August 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Look like someone's been possessed by the green-eyed monster! Great update!
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June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i loved the story plz do write more...
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May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*blinks and mumbles something about a cold shower*
The sex scene was hot.
The quidditch scene sorta confused me, but that might be cause I wasn't reading properly at the time.
Really can't wait for the next chapter Daye!
The sex scene was hot.
The quidditch scene sorta confused me, but that might be cause I wasn't reading properly at the time.
Really can't wait for the next chapter Daye!
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still liking the story. The part about Tonks not being ready to commit to a relationship that goes beyond the physical is really refreshing considering the canon Harry Potter and the fanfiction clich
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May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sillly git. She's freakin MARRIED to the guy AND he's great in the sack. Why shouldn't she let herself come to love him?
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May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... I dont know what to think. Dont get me wrong, i liked the chapter. Well written. Good lenght. But the problem i have is how this fic is going. It started as a private relationship of two newlyweds who both were a bit 'cocoo'. Now it's a complicated relationship of teacher/student, married couple, young adult/teenager, popular kid/hot teacher etc. all those things. And it's most of all public. I know it's expected but i personally dont enjoy reading how they interract in classroom, in the great hall etc where people watch them likes crows.
I was happy with the way you repaired their matters, but i think someone should remind Tonks just who he is dealing with and i dont mean 'chosen one' but a teenager who actually had a crappy life.
Few questions if i dare. Now that we are in school, malfoy taunts are expected, but what about rest of the community? In the original 6th book, Harry had become a 'hottie' to girls in school. I think you should take advantage of that to create extra tension between them. just like Harry got jealous when couple older boys looked at his wife. That's just something i suggest.
Love your fic. Hope to see it updated soon.
I was happy with the way you repaired their matters, but i think someone should remind Tonks just who he is dealing with and i dont mean 'chosen one' but a teenager who actually had a crappy life.
Few questions if i dare. Now that we are in school, malfoy taunts are expected, but what about rest of the community? In the original 6th book, Harry had become a 'hottie' to girls in school. I think you should take advantage of that to create extra tension between them. just like Harry got jealous when couple older boys looked at his wife. That's just something i suggest.
Love your fic. Hope to see it updated soon.
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May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was my first time reading H/T story. I must say that I liked it a lot more than I thought it would. I had never really considered this pairing before, but it seems, thanks to you, that it works quite well. I thought it was a great story.
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May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I never reviewed this story before but I find it quite entertaining. I normally don't like this pairing but the way you write it is sexy as hell.
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May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter, keep it up.