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That was certainly a new way of handling that same old plot, but you did it rather good and made it entertaining to read.
You could have developed the plot before turning their relationship into something and make it more interesting. I guess I mean it felt like you rushed the transaction just for the sake of fitting one more smut scene before the next chapter.
Anyways, good work so far and looking forward to an update!

Cant wait to see the fallout of their mid-day sex romp.

Just came across this story. I like how you characterized Tonks here.

Argh!! Petunia, you bitch!

Lol, I noticed Tonks forgot to put up a Silencing spell, so I was starting to wonder just how loud they were getting. You certainly made sure we didn't forget where they were!

I loved this chapter, Daye. I loved that Harry went to the trouble of cooking for her, and his reaction to her tardiness was right on cue. I could so see him acting that way while still struggling to work out a bit of maturity in his head. I loved his thoughts and insight into how Tonks would be feeling with everything she's gone through so far and how he adjusts to make things better for her. This Harry is just adorable and perfectly thoughtful, in every way.

The sex, good Lord, the sex! Wonderful job, just lovely and sensual and true. You could feel Harry's amazement as he learns how to give a woman an orgasm for the first time ever, and having her Metamorphmagus abilities kick in just then was a great detail. It made her climax all the more palpable and generous.

The way that Harry and Tonks have been talking to each other is so dead on, too. All of Harry's apologies are so in keeping with his natural tendencies to believe he's the fuck-up, and I love that he now has Tonks to assure him that he's good, better than good, and that he is deserving of love and intimacy. They're lovely together.

A nice chapter

That was an excellent chapter. We already have a very good idea of Harry's usual misery when at Privet Drive, so the only thing you really needed to show us in that respect was how Tonks was dealing with it all, and her interactions with Vernon and Harry did that quite well. The ending scene with Harry and Tonks was great stuff. I know that, posting here on AFF, I feel compelled to try and work a smut scene into each chapter I write. But in this case, I think smut would have been out of place. That scene stood alone, and deservedly so.

A great new chapter, keep it up.

great chapter!
Continue,
Z.

This is was so... warm. It made me feel so warm. Thanks for that. Really good chapter. You really know how to write these 'fluffy' things that i like. It really made the chapter when Harry and Tonks finally made up. And you didnt force a lemon in it was a plus. Sex is good but now would've been a wrong moment. May i suggest that in enxt chapter you write some 'article' tonks will read from Prophet. im really excited to wait and see the reaction of the wizarding world when the word gets out.

See you soon.

I like this. There is never enough writing about Tonks. And the fun you can have with a woman who can turn into anyone. Looking forward to the next chapter.