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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
He's arrived! Lord Slytherin has arrived! necesito m
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I like how you included the journal entries into the story. You might want to fix one of your sentences in chapter 3:
"They moaned and crowed him before he handed it over to them and they crowded the child with soft moans cries of pain from the child ringing through the room as the women no doubt molested and tortured the poor thing."
You said women but you were talking about men weren't you?
"They moaned and crowed him before he handed it over to them and they crowded the child with soft moans cries of pain from the child ringing through the room as the women no doubt molested and tortured the poor thing."
You said women but you were talking about men weren't you?
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May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please do not let Draco die or become some kind of zombie. Draco is Harry's friend...well it seems his only friend outside of Severus. Please do not kill him....that will not endear Harry to Voldemort. Let him still marry his Lord after a prolonged illness of some sort.
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May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As a huge fan of Dracula, specifically the version you are writing a cross-over, I must say that you are doing a wonderful job. I feel the characters you've placed in the story is perfect! As critical as I can be, I find little fault with your story. I truthfully hope that you continue and update soon. I cannot wait!!
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May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
soooo Voldemort plans to keep Sev prisoner while he goes to England to meet his long lost love!? will Sev end up like Lockhart?
i enjoyed Nevilled in this chapter was just to cute
Kudos times two :)
i enjoyed Nevilled in this chapter was just to cute
Kudos times two :)
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May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
is voldemort planning to get info about Harry by keeping Sev there for a month?
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kudos :)
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kudos :)
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oohh i really really like! have been looking for some Harry/ Voldemort stories with a really good story line. this is very promising looking forward to the updates. Kudos!!
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm reading Dracula right now, but I think I'll revist the movie. X3