rate_review Reviews

amazing story

Simply incredible. Parts were awful to assimilate but necessary to the emotional belief in the plot and characters. I can't say "I loved it.". I can say, however, that I will remember it, and recommend it, and read more of your work. Thank you.

That was rather interesting. Nice idea, and nicely done! I liked it.

That was cute ancd sad. I wanted to cry for Raven. This was a very good and well written story. :)

This is... I almost want to describe it as 'lyrical', were not the subject so terribly dark. Your use of the alternative timeline theory is perceptive. I actually wept when I read of poor RAB having to kill his friends, as well as being forced back to sanity. And Harry choosing to take on a half-century of memories not truly his own to obtain those cures was painfully inspired. Pity I can't read German, I'm sure there are some subtleties I missed even in the translated version. Excellent.

Very nice!!! Thank you for sharing!

I was really enjoying this fic, until the fourth chapter. That was a let down. I'm sorry, but I have to be honest. I wish you would have added one more chapter, at least, before the epilogue. There is just such a huge gap of information (or storytelling) between chapters three and four. I was very disappointed. But that's just me. I do think that what you wrote in chapters one through three and even chapter four (even it was the epilogue) was written brilliantly. You're an excellent writer. You just dropped the ball on this one by ending it quickly, in my opinion.

Good luck with future fics ^_^