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May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good job. I like the set up of the plot. Can't wait to experience the climax and the downfall of Ginny and Harry's relationship and the rise of Draco and Harry's relationship. I like the tone of this first chapter. I can't wait to see how Harry evolves throughout the story.
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May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I think this chapter is setting us up for a deeply emotional plot. The pressure Harry is putting on himself is absolutely absurd. I can't wait until he really falls in love.
Please update soon ^^
Please update soon ^^
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May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it!