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May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh, that is so good! I really loved how you did young hesitant smitten snape, and then in the middle it was kind-of layered with old snape, and then, of course, we get the classic snape we all know and love, but with a bit more of an open mind and heart due to his recent teen experiences. The feeling of 'fatedness' is something I'm trying to figure out how to explain in my own wip.... And I especially loved this description:
""This was just how they spoke to one another. A hard shag behind the Weasley's shed said 'stop fiddling with your dress robes. You look gorgeous.' An arse full of cum said 'I love and accept you.' A blow job said, 'I would devour all of you if I could. Then you would always be with me.' A slow waltz said 'I love you so much I want everyone to know.' Touching the face meant 'you are so precious to me I don't know how I ever lived without you.' And a kiss? A kiss meant 'between us, words aren't necessary.'""
That is so true for them! Great job making my laugh and get turned on at the same time! (and cute how you stuck in a bit of your vik and bill) And the resolving of the ginny issue was simply perfect :)
Well done! Great job, yet again! Can't wait for your next project :)
""This was just how they spoke to one another. A hard shag behind the Weasley's shed said 'stop fiddling with your dress robes. You look gorgeous.' An arse full of cum said 'I love and accept you.' A blow job said, 'I would devour all of you if I could. Then you would always be with me.' A slow waltz said 'I love you so much I want everyone to know.' Touching the face meant 'you are so precious to me I don't know how I ever lived without you.' And a kiss? A kiss meant 'between us, words aren't necessary.'""
That is so true for them! Great job making my laugh and get turned on at the same time! (and cute how you stuck in a bit of your vik and bill) And the resolving of the ginny issue was simply perfect :)
Well done! Great job, yet again! Can't wait for your next project :)
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May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
adorable
cute
fluffy
why haveny more people read this its fabulous
cute
fluffy
why haveny more people read this its fabulous
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May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is a lovely start! i love the golden trio working together and you write them perfectly. de-aged snape is of course a kink of mine ;)
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May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore your story.I was up readin all night Didn't have time for my beauty sleep!Keep up the good work!(gives chocolate chip cookie)
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May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ch. 02:
i think you are a master in creating erotic tension this line of harry's "whoa! did i really think that snape is hot?" should be old by now but you use it kn such a sweet context, and the one comparing snape with a kitten is utterly ... cute ;)
i think you are a master in creating erotic tension this line of harry's "whoa! did i really think that snape is hot?" should be old by now but you use it kn such a sweet context, and the one comparing snape with a kitten is utterly ... cute ;)
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May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved it so cute and sweet!